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Destinations

Rating: 5.0

Alone in this world
Lost in a sea of time
The destinations mocking me,
Where are they taking me
I will take the helm of life's ship,
Steer it towards the sun of smiles
Through blinding light
And darkest night
Every hour a new fight
And yet, no port in sight

The destinations mocking me
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Destinations
Wednesday, January 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,destination,life,philosophical
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 January 2016

Taking destinations in life's ship is very wise, interesting and amazing definitely. Fantastic sharing done with reality.10

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Ayman Parray 13 January 2016

Thanks, Kumarmani. Taking the helm of Life's ship is the turning point.

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Nosheen Irfan 18 February 2016

Beautiful poem. It goes straight to the heart. Everyone can relate to it. And you have put your feelings so well, in such lovely imagery.10

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Abhilasha Bhatt 27 January 2016

Where are they taking me I will take the helm of life's ship, Steer it towards the sun of smiles A beautiful and thoughtful poem.....beautifully narrated.....thank you for sharing :)

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 17 January 2016

Verily, the question, Where are they taking me? is very thoughtful.

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Ayman Parray 17 January 2016

Indeed it is, dear friend Abdulrazak. Thank you.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 January 2016

This poem you have written as a true philosopher. You begin the poem with a beautiful reflection on life. Alone in this world Lost in a sea of time The destinations mocking me, Where are they taking me? This is a question, i ask too, everyday of my life! A fabulous picture, Ayman! Yes, it is full 10

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Ayman Parray 13 January 2016

Thanks, Geetaji. I am glad you were able to relate.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 January 2016

Lost in the sea of time! But, there is hope ahead of me. Nice work.

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Ayman Parray 13 January 2016

Thanks, Edward. Hope is all we have sometimes.

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