Discovery Poem by Shahzia Batool

Discovery

Rating: 3.8


I remember well
that enchanting moment
when Fate got kind to me
and gave me a chance
to discover You in me,
then, at once, I found You
in my isolation,
my thoughts and my dreams-
dreams that got rich...
since then, I remained
no longer isolated
in my isolation...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Besa Dede 23 April 2013

A beautiful poem. It gives thought provoking ideas, as to what the Discovery is about. It could be either way... Good write :) Regards, ~Besa

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Walterrean Salley 13 September 2012

A celebratory poem. The poet had an epiphany. An awakening, obviously with a wonderful life-changing effect. And such personal, priceless moment is immortalize in this piece of gem.

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Meena Mustafa 03 July 2012

Beautiful write! Thank you.

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Captain Cur 25 June 2012

I deeply felt the words of this poem as you became filled with the presence of another's spirit, or a spiritual awakening. Very nobly written.

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Shumaila Bari 22 June 2012

simply beautiful and mystic... love it Shazia

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Passionate Reader 02 July 2013

lovely poem! ! ! This is one of my favourites! ! ! I immensely enjoy whenever i read this. This is the beauty of your writings that they flow like a stream! ! ! And this is your genius that you put forth a complex idea with such an ease thus make your readers love and cherish the beauty of your poems! ! ! since then, I remained no longer isolated in my isolation... My favourite lines; simple but beautiful! ! i loved it! ! ! YES a great discovery it is! ! ! :)

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Valsa George 20 May 2013

When we find ourselves in others, we no longer remain isolated in isolation! ! A small thought big enough to conquer very many hearts! ! A priceless moment of a great discovery either personal or philosophical! !

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Farah Ilyas 15 May 2013

Enriched in isolation, is a sign of true love.... very sentimental & touching poem... love your way of poetry.... believe me.

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Farah Ilyas 15 May 2013

Enriched in isolation, is a sign of true love.... very sentimental & touching poem... love your way of poetry.... believe me.

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Yasmin Khan 27 April 2013

Solitude becomes bliss and we are not alone when we discover someone in ourselves, a romantic piece written straight from heart. Dekhna Taqreer Ki Lazzat Ki Jo Usne Kaha, Main Ne Ye Jaana K Goya Ye Bhi Mere Dil Main Hai,

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