I sent you a kiss
via air, alas
The wind was not
In your direction!
It blew it far away
from here
another cheek became
a promised landing pier
Oh dear, we tend to
overestimate the
conductivity of the air.
Sofia,02. June 2008
You suggest it didn't land in dis location - but did in dat! Nice tight construction with clever rhyme. Rgds, Ivan
imprint might be dappled kiss might be scalar or vector, , , , , , , , , , , , , wonderful imagery by the love, well penned, thanks
Lucky was that cheek...............beautiful poem with the flying kiss
it's so much in the fitness of things...doesn't everything begin with a particular objective and end up as something else...we're all wind-prone!
How wonderful to imagine a kiss sent along the air and landing on some unsuspecting person's cheek! ! ! Bet they were thrilled... Lovely poem Onelia. HG: -) xx
Awonderful mix up of humour and sarcam. Loved it. O dear, you sent a flying kiss, Such kisses many a time miss. LOL! ! ! ! !
Nice poem, a kiss went astray and landed on another cheek. 10 for this.
Wow! How nice is form of the poem; how beautiful is the content of the poem! Really nice job done so far sending a kiss! Enjoyed.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hahahahah or wind currents for that matter ;) .....awesome and original