Divine Fate Poem by Rajesh Thankappan

Though fate plays a part in deciding who we are, we cannot sit idle leaving everything as fate decrees! God has given man the intelligence and ingenuity to jump over obstacles and reach our goal! We have to do our part.... the rest God will do! Most of the men who have won success are those who challenged their fate and moved forward! A great poem!

Very true you are. Life is entirely dependent on universe, stars and sun. Fate too has big role in life. Wonderfully presented poem shared really.

Oftentimes, I find myself pondering the matter of Fate; sometimes events and situations that occur in our lives, seem to have a predestined path. And there are times when we can actually sense, that if we intervene in the right time and in the right moment, we can change the course of life. I very much enjoyed this poem.

Remote controlled by the secret strings of fate? ......nice poem

Yes fate and destiny play vital roles in our life yet I believe we are the makers of our own destiny, to quote “Sow a thought and you reap an action, Sow an action and you reap a habit, Sow a habit and you reap a character, Sow a character and you reap your destiny” is what Buddhist Proverb says and destiny is exactly accordingly shaped and we have been gifted with talents and that's God's and what we do with it is our gift back to God and that's fate........Rajeshji.......nice composition on nice concept.......10

Yes, I absolutely agree with you that fate has a big role in our life! Your expression caries the truth: But have we not seen people/Navigate cheerfully unhindered by fate? /Surdas and Milton wrote to create ripples/Though their worldly visions had barricaded gates.....Thanks for sharing this precise piece of poetry with us....10

it's owk bt on dis particular piece I think it wud hv made a whole lot more sense if a end rhymes had a rhyming scheme at d end notes. that's my view though doesn't discredit d work in anyway.

But have we not seen people Navigate cheerfully unhindered by fate? Surdas and Milton wrote to create ripples Though their worldly visions had barricaded gates.- - - - Fate is that unknown force by which we all are controlled.But faith in the divine power will help us navigate the difficult circumstances.

Fate as cosmic forces believed to control earthly events is aptly captured in the poem. Beautiful piece of poetry elegantly brought forth with conviction. Awesome! Thanks for sharing Rajesh.

Fated we are to live and eventually die Beneath the bright blue orb called the sky As intelligent beings, animals or birds that fly And then five feet deep with worms very humbly lie…. Great poem of yours sir. I invite you to my page too for your critical comments......