Divine Showers Poem by Vijay Sai R

This is refreshing poetic rain that emerges out of the dark cloud of torment. I really like this poem.

Dear Vijay, Thanks for your invite. It's a good poem. The message is loud and clear.Choice of words and rhythm is perfectly maintained.I feel two changes will make the flow of your poem better, this is just a suggestion, choice is yours, In L-14-'-Is there anyone who could hear' may be changed to-'Is there anybody there? ' In L-19-'I thanked my heavenly friend' to 'I thanked Heaven' I liked the poem. rated at 9. keep on writing Rajkumar

Good poem Good composition. Divine showers here Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

i like the way the words flow, well done dear, thanks for sharing

Good composition but if I am not mistaken the rain hides my tears but not my fears okay anyway good poem. Nice meter.

its a lovely poem it gives hope to the hopeless

Desperate quest for success is finally met and it is the beauty of this write!

Great poem, Vijai. I love the ending. very inspiring

Beautiful poem. When we keep our eyes wide open (probably brain) , opportunities are unlimited. It's like stars in sky, we have to scale, just, the Terrace to view. Wait for the cloud to remove veil, all disappointments will vanish. I write this, that all our expressions reflect our true inner feelings. I write every expressions literally. I take every expressions literally. Nice expressions.

Your poetry is wonderfully full and alive, you give strong and intense feelings and emotions, your visual wording is well done. This is a wonderful poem, very intense. thanks for sharing Michael