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Don'T Look...

Rating: 3.0

Don't look.
The world's about to break.

Don't look.
The world's about to chuck out all its light
and stuff us in the chokepit of its dark,
That black and fat suffocated place
Where we will kill or die or dance or weep
Or scream of whine or squeak like mice
To renegotiate our starting price.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 31 January 2017

Squeak! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Richard Wlodarski 31 January 2017

Sometimes it seems that way. Especially when tyrants are in charge. But I choose to see the glass being half full! Excellent poem. Truly deserving of the mighty 10!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 January 2017

Thanks for sharing..... Bernie...??????

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Suryendu Chaudhury 15 October 2020

Seems like a poem on the drudgeries of existential crisis.

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Seamus O Brian 31 January 2017

Reminiscent of the bard's take on life. Thanks for sharing this enjoyable read.

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Alex Sarich 31 January 2017

fantastic description of life.

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M Asim Nehal 31 January 2017

Fantastic short poem.....To renegotiate our starting price.10++

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 January 2017

Very nice. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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