! ! ! Don'T Say Goodbye! ! ! Poem by Chrishtiana Reed

! ! ! Don'T Say Goodbye! ! !

Rating: 3.3


Why? Why did you say goodbye?
I thought you loved me;
I guess I was wrong.

What made you leave?
WasI wrong? ?

' I love you,
Always have, always will.'

Dont you love me? ?

Please don't go...
For my heart is already ash,
Don't make it disapear..

For your the one whom had my heart,
Now look at it;
There is nothing there....

Don't hurt me anymore! !

If you say goodbye,
I guess i must die...

For youi said those 3 words
'I Love You'
And they made me yours.

You say goodbye,
That's you leaving me behind to die.

Please Don't leave,
Dont say goodbye,
Just come here for a while.

I want to hear your voice,
I want to see your smile,
I just want to be in your arms for a wile.

Just come here,
As I place a kiss apon your lips;
To show you ouyr love is to last ands last.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

1. no matter what Jesus always love you.2. If without someone's love you'd die, then you're putting that person in the position of a 'god' not a lover and that's extremely bad. The poem however shows ur desperation for their love. Love is a two way street, if they left it was never love. check ur spellings always.

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Preston Simmons 30 October 2011

I love the line: 'I want to hear your voice, I want to see your smile, I just want to be in your arms for a while.' This flows very well together and adds a great description to the poem. I love the message of everlasting love. It is something that everyone is seeking.

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Bella Hernandez 30 October 2011

Beautiful poem! shows what many young girls go through for this thing called 'Love' ~Bella

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A Lifetime Of Fame 30 October 2011

I really love this poem, because it shows something that I know all too much.

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Romeo Della Valle 28 October 2011

Beauty radiates through this well penned write that clearly shows your great poetic talent! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and God Bless You, Chrishtiana! Keep giving the World more of your brilliant and talented works! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Nikunj Sharma 29 March 2012

Emotion, longing and the zeal. This poem has it all.

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Deep Mukherjee 31 January 2012

it's really beautiful considering your age....enjoyed it :)

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Lexie Bousman 06 January 2012

sad, it sucks to be heartbroken

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Chidori Storm 29 December 2011

This poem is really beautiful. The man who hurt and left you has no clue what he has lost. You are a really talented poet. Your poems really speak to me. I can connect to them so much.

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Cosmic Dreamer 10 November 2011

Love is all conquering... Love is all nourishing... Love is a deeper pain than any man can imagine... This is what your poem said to me... Brilliant poem...

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Chrishtiana Reed

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Twin Falls Idaho
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