! ! ! Don'T Say Goodbye! ! ! Poem by Chrishtiana Reed

! ! ! Don'T Say Goodbye! ! !

Rating: 3.3


Why? Why did you say goodbye?
I thought you loved me;
I guess I was wrong.

What made you leave?
WasI wrong? ?

' I love you,
Always have, always will.'

Dont you love me? ?

Please don't go...
For my heart is already ash,
Don't make it disapear..

For your the one whom had my heart,
Now look at it;
There is nothing there....

Don't hurt me anymore! !

If you say goodbye,
I guess i must die...

For youi said those 3 words
'I Love You'
And they made me yours.

You say goodbye,
That's you leaving me behind to die.

Please Don't leave,
Dont say goodbye,
Just come here for a while.

I want to hear your voice,
I want to see your smile,
I just want to be in your arms for a wile.

Just come here,
As I place a kiss apon your lips;
To show you ouyr love is to last ands last.

Wednesday, August 31, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: goodbye
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

1. no matter what Jesus always love you.2. If without someone's love you'd die, then you're putting that person in the position of a 'god' not a lover and that's extremely bad. The poem however shows ur desperation for their love. Love is a two way street, if they left it was never love. check ur spellings always.

0 0 Reply
Preston Simmons 30 October 2011

I love the line: 'I want to hear your voice, I want to see your smile, I just want to be in your arms for a while.' This flows very well together and adds a great description to the poem. I love the message of everlasting love. It is something that everyone is seeking.

0 0 Reply
Bella Hernandez 30 October 2011

Beautiful poem! shows what many young girls go through for this thing called 'Love' ~Bella

0 0 Reply
A Lifetime Of Fame 30 October 2011

I really love this poem, because it shows something that I know all too much.

0 0 Reply
Romeo Della Valle 28 October 2011

Beauty radiates through this well penned write that clearly shows your great poetic talent! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and God Bless You, Chrishtiana! Keep giving the World more of your brilliant and talented works! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

0 0 Reply
Nikunj Sharma 29 March 2012

Emotion, longing and the zeal. This poem has it all.

0 0 Reply
Deep Mukherjee 31 January 2012

it's really beautiful considering your age....enjoyed it :)

0 0 Reply
Lexie Bousman 06 January 2012

sad, it sucks to be heartbroken

0 0 Reply
Chidori Storm 29 December 2011

This poem is really beautiful. The man who hurt and left you has no clue what he has lost. You are a really talented poet. Your poems really speak to me. I can connect to them so much.

0 0 Reply
Cosmic Dreamer 10 November 2011

Love is all conquering... Love is all nourishing... Love is a deeper pain than any man can imagine... This is what your poem said to me... Brilliant poem...

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
1 / 11
Chrishtiana Reed

Chrishtiana Reed

Twin Falls Idaho
Close
Error Success