Done Fighting Poem by Silentpoet Grl

Done Fighting

Rating: 5.0


knocked to the ground
got to get back up
press on another day.
you came back
attacked again
I fell back down
stood up fought on
took on another day.
waiting you caught me
shoved me down again
struggling to get up this time
collapsing back down
too weak to carry on
you have your victory
this time I am done fighting.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard Snyder 27 October 2011

This poem is really nice! However, I'm not sure you're the type to let someone keep 'knocking you down. You won't let that happen again.I'm sure! !

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Dave Walker 25 October 2011

Really really like this. An amazing poem and an amazing spirit.

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Linda Maree 24 October 2011

Great poetry. Just remember this person who is constanlty 'knocking you down' will forever be knocked down with the actions they take.

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