Unending Time Poem by Silentpoet Grl

Unending Time

Rating: 5.0

echoing thoughts long to disappear
clock ticking, counting passed time
trapped inside these walls, running
lost and afraid, searching for an exit
strung along the halls faded photos
cherished memories cracked, worn,
time is shattering, broken glass falls
destroying everything that was good
blood runs down these empty walls,
revealing my hidden scars and shame
each day now painfully rewinds again
a shadowy past hauntingly reminding
of whats been done is forever engraved
the cruel nightmares always repeating
chaining me down, eyes sewed open,
forced to watch as life gets torn away
trapped in darkness of tortured time
another single grain of sand dropping
wearily falling through the hour glass
achingly counting this unending time.

Rizvana Parveen 22 January 2012

good expression......

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Heyyou Boy 22 January 2012

This is a very strong write. I feel your pain sis.

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Dave Walker 23 January 2012

Very powerful as always. Haunting in parts, So very well put together. A fantastic poem.

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Dougie Darko 23 January 2012

Very strong, I can relate! Great Piece

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Scotty Dogg 24 January 2012

Grl, this is beautiful. The words sort of rain down the page. Cascading, if you will. I always want to give you the biggest hug ever, cause your cool! !

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Pheko Motaung 04 February 2012

Grand intimidating stuff! Really amazing poem.Congratulations.

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Cosmic Dreamer 31 January 2012

All the pains of life can be healed... Time dulls all wounds... Another agonisingly beautiful write...

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Darkangel Flyfree 30 January 2012

Wow that was amazing. I love how you put your words together. I think you're going to be a great poet one day.

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Walterrean Salley 28 January 2012

Very well expressed. Nightmares seem endless, but there is hope, and I wish you well.10

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Bulletcookie 2017 27 January 2012

Tick Tock... This poem resonates like one of those grandfather clocks with the wooden box case that sounds out the precision moments of its life. Tick Tock...

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