i was in tears as i walked away
nothing would ever be the same
heavy words i so longed to say,
- silence - as none could escape.
crushed, by what you had done
glass tears etching pain, cutting,
scarring hurt on this fragile heart
past memories shown on repeat,
no longer hidden, shame sets in
my blade carving pain upon flesh
mistakes never to be forgiven.
raging battles torment my mind
unsure of where to go from here
with hurt written upon each tear
nightmares never to be forgotten
haunted, i long to silence them.
choking, clenched ropes of regret,
pull tightly around my weak heart,
shards fall, left laying on the floor
shattered, never to be restored
kneeling down, picking up pieces
they're sharp like a razor's edge
a painful cut with every attempt
dying to mend this brokenness,
blood spills on pieces left to lay,
life -silenced- pain drifts away.
'glass tears etching pain...', stunning image. very deep in the core of the heart. well done!
Glass tears etching pain sends chills down my spine. This one is amazingly good SPG.: D
Sad but i liked the poems flow and content. Appears you have another winner.L.
And not I think you're going to be a great poet one day.You are right now and you are the greatest the world has ever produced! I salute you.I take my hat off to you.
Ok i just love reading your work. I flow though as i read. I love it how do you do it lol.
this is really sad....but good write.....i really criered when i read this
Your words haunt the night As you grow in your fright You are indeed strong Although you always long For the freedom of innocence That was taken in insolence For you, my heart doth ache As, I wish you could make For yourself an inner peace, As his hold does decrease. Blessings to heal your soul, Love aimed to console The pain and anguish As in his crime you languish Amazing woman that you are As I send blessings from afar. My soul is with you...smiles n blessings.
this poem is amazing.. I love the way you wrote it and how it sounds.. it's something I can relate to and I want to invite you to.read my poem: goodbye.. hope to hear from you and keep writing!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great poem. I will read more of your work after this. Lot's of torment, but written nicely. You are a talented writer. Nice work.