Silentpoet Grl


Unforgiving Demons - Poem by Silentpoet Grl

in the darkness always lurking
hungry for all control, preying
shadows dance across walls
their presence enclose tightly
long, sharp fingernails grazing
slicing me as they twirl angrily.
crimson bleeds into darkness
staining it with regret and pain
encircling, shadows taunt me
eyes glowing, voices haunting
powerfully overtaking my mind
as the demons gain all control
strong hate burns deep inside
searing pain flows through veins,
every torturous act they bestow
each cut tearing away more life
hisses saying all i will never be,
purpose is forcefully ripped away
vivid dreams soon fade, diminish
molded into morbid nightmares
lurking unforgiving demons, wait
hungrily, sharpening their claws
eagerly waiting for the next game


Comments about Unforgiving Demons by Silentpoet Grl

  • (2/22/2012 3:22:00 PM)

    your words never cease to amaze me, you talent is better than some professionals I have read...blessings....DeVa (Report)Reply

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  • Sara Fielder (1/25/2012 6:14:00 PM)

    Terrifying, gothic like visuals. I feels chills running down my spine.10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Jonny Brackney (1/24/2012 3:47:00 PM)

    i like it. reminds me of my poem titled 'night'. your writing style reminds me of my own about a year ago. keep writing. you're onto something. my only suggestion might be to slim your poems a bit. some of them are a bit too fat, and sometimes less words say more. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/17/2012 9:11:00 PM)

    usually i don't like when people write about cutting or feeling like this because it seems so fake
    but your words and descriptions make me believe you and put you way above the rest
    i'll read more and rate this a ten
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  • Sharron Stephenson (1/17/2012 5:22:00 AM)

    pleasedo not let the demons win you have a gift use the pen to help (Report)Reply

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  • (1/17/2012 4:09:00 AM)

    mystic, cryptic, delusional, but yet very very powerful! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/15/2012 1:59:00 PM)

    Great write! ! !
    I believe there are demons and that they can attach themselves to people with out them even knowing it. A person can be rid of them by calling upon the Holy Spirit and also being anointed by a fellow believer of Christ while being prayed over. If you are being tormented by demons then you know there is another world most don't see. So to take the next step wouldn't be a far one.
    Dear Father, I call upon the Holy Spirit to fill your body and command by the power of Christ you are leased by these demons. Amen
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  • Brianna Winebarger (1/13/2012 7:26:00 AM)

    it is sad and crypitic. it pianted a vivd picture in my head. i could pratically feel the pain the narrator is in. fantastic. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/10/2012 7:36:00 PM)

    A great poem. I like it. (Report)Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (1/6/2012 7:54:00 PM)

    Wow! What an excellent, well penned and deep thoughts translated into this page as a clear sign of wisdom! Thank you for sharing! 10+++Love and Peace for always! (Report)Reply

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  • Ebi Robert (1/6/2012 5:24:00 PM)

    those demons are not afraid ooo. It is time they get a red card before the get our red part. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/5/2012 7:46:00 PM)

    from strong hate strong love is born... good poetry! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/5/2012 4:40:00 PM)

    Perhaps the real test is to forgive the demons, rather than to want to be forgiven...you are an amazing writer, I have missed reading your work....blessings..de (Report)Reply

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  • Vipins Puthooran (1/4/2012 6:38:00 AM)

    The real demons are here in this world but we always lurking to thier den))
    An excellent poem|||
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  • (1/4/2012 4:50:00 AM)

    I hope that one day these demons will stop haunting us, the nightmares will stop and a new life, free of all the bad memories and crazy demons will begin........great poem my friend. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/3/2012 1:43:00 PM)

    How frightening, so real. Very vivid.
    I know these demons too.
    May God help us.
    Great write.
    Keep penning. :)
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  • (1/3/2012 7:06:00 AM)

    A great poem, our demons are always there,
    We have to try keep them at bay, until one day
    we beat them. A great write.
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  • Richard Jarboe (1/3/2012 6:58:00 AM)

    at least demons are consistent and predictable. Good one.
    ric
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 3, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 3, 2012


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