Dove Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Dove

Rating: 5.0


I cage,
the doves of love,
as warm kisses,
On her swollen lips;
red as the ruby.
Then, her eyes winking,
Enticing my tender dreams
To hide under its lashes
And make their nest there.

Wednesday, October 26, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 26 October 2011

This is a bud of flower, that will bloom as a complete beautiful one, ...i mean the writing is less but the feeling more...it creating a space for emotional blood flow in your new veins.. Vipins, one more time you good a great job! nice write :) _Unwritten Soul

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Harindhar Reddy 26 October 2011

Oh, my god! You are making me to go apes over love by these lines......... 'I cage, the doves of love, as warm kisses, in her swollen lips; red as a ruby! ' oh, Cripes, What romanticism, just like a Keats or Elizabeth Barret Browning you to hit the chord of my heart and pulled the string at it. I thoroughly enjoyed these romantic poet. Lights on! Hats off to the creator of this poem Vipins.........................Keep climbing the ladder to reach the top with poems like these........

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Kevin Patrick 26 October 2011

Speaking of romantic poetry their also an element of Byron here, 'I’m thinking she walks in beauty', since Byron and the romantic era in general are my favourite period for poetry, this captivates my attention.

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Jacqui Broad 26 October 2011

I feel it in my fingers, I feel it in my toes. Love is all around me and so the feeling grows. Quoting from a song, because this poetry are for the hopeless romantic souls. Great poem. Lovely...

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Dead Leaf 28 October 2011

i like it...nice to read

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John Hancock 28 October 2011

your poem is short sweet and lovely well done

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 October 2011

Lovely piece of writing.

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Hans Vr 27 October 2011

wow, Vipins, well written

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Rachel Butler 27 October 2011

'And her wink's flutter entice my tender dreams' RAB

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