Dre@m Of Love Poem by tanvi damle

Dre@m Of Love

Rating: 3.3


I dreamed a dream of you and me,
you were holding my hand and whispering
I love you always forever,
we shall always be together.
You got down on your knees,
and said I was your dream and destiny.
'Marry me right now' was what you said,
so we planned to marry right there without a best man and a bridesmaid,
You said, 'I love you' and i did too,
and then i was married to you.
With the promise to love each other forever,
and with the promise to always be together.
With the winds playing the music of our hearts,
and the waves singing 'Tho never shall be apart.'
We danced on the beach in the moonlight,
with the stars twinkling ever so bright.
We were lost in the love of each others eyes,
and we found a whole new paradise.
So now I kept the dream in the jar and sealed it tight,
cuz I wanna dream the same dream every night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aira Olayvar 21 March 2010

Kept safe! Yeah, it spoke of the reality that when we want something to remain in us… we are always trying to find a way to not to lose it. Your dream of love will hopefully be reality.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 19 March 2010

awwwwwwwww........ sweet and nice

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Nikunj Sharma 19 March 2010

keep your dreams tight and close to you, they are quite precious...I liked the images here...the beach, moonlight and the jar....good poem

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Terence George Craddock 18 March 2010

I liked the nature within the dream, I did the marriage theme around twp rings once. Nice write

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Pradyumna Jyotir 18 March 2010

Thank God Tanvi....that was a dream......such marriages are void in the eyes of law.but there was a tender romantic ambience about the whole poem......and it was innocent as well....good...well done....

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this is very touching. i like it.

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Leah Ayliffe 05 April 2010

'With the winds playing the music of our hearts, and the waves singing 'Tho never shall be apart.' We danced on the beach in the moonlight, with the stars twinkling ever so bright. We were lost in the love of each others eyes, and we found a whole new paradise.' Loooved it! ! beautiful write!

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Tom Golding 25 March 2010

A nice write up of a lovely dream which every young woman must have but few achieve.

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Kesav Easwaran 24 March 2010

dream and your love sealed safe...good romantic piece

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 21 March 2010

The love of dream.........a good write..........

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