Dreamland Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Dreamland

Rating: 5.0


Let me dream of you tonight,
Walk with me upon the shore,
Take my hand and hold it tight,
The sun will shine again once more.

Seagulls fly in sky so blue,
Their calls are heard as we walk by,
It's so good to be with you,
I miss you as the years go by.

Lift my spirits with your smile,
Touch my heart with memories fine,
We will walk for many miles,
It's good to hold your hand in mine.

This is the place where we shall meet,
The real life we had is gone,
Let's feel the sand beneath our feet,
In dreamland life with you goes on.


Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 02 March 2023

Vivid dreams are a reality not experienced by too many. Beautiful reality to your poetry, Jayne.

1 0 Reply
Kim Barney 02 March 2023

Jayne, I have to agree with Cowboy Ron. I would not be surprised to see this chosen as member poem of the day!

2 0 Reply
Jayne Louise Davies 02 March 2023

Thank you so much Kim x So pleased you liked it x

1 0

And I hope Ron's prediction comes true soon!

1 0 Reply

A beautiful poem of love and remembrance, " It's good to hold your hand in mine"..exquisite. " In dreamland life with you goes on." Great rhyme scheme. Fantastic poem, Jayne.5*

2 0 Reply
Jayne Louise Davies 03 March 2023

Thank you so much for your kind comments : ) Much appreciated x

1 0
Cowboy Ron Williams 01 March 2023

Excellent poem, Jayne! Congrats on Member Poem of the Day at some point in the near future!

2 0 Reply
Jayne Louise Davies 02 March 2023

Thank you so much Ron : ) Your lovely comments mean a lot x

1 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
Close
Error Success