Dreams Poem by Patricia Gale

Dreams

Rating: 5.0


When your lips gently found mine
I found I was one heart beat away from eternity
Lost in a time of aimlessly floating on clouds of love
A single kiss and my world turned upside down

Dreamy sighs now form from my heart
Visions of your caress against my bare skin
My shoulders begin to tingle
Sending chills coursing through my being

The power of dreams whilst we slumber
Create a perpetual longing in the heart
To be loved and give love
Dreams and reality, if only they could be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
... Sheila 17 April 2007

What a beautiful, sweet dream. Very good piece. Blessings. Sheila

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Geoff Warden 17 April 2007

As a dreamers heart sings, grand write........

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Bishnupada Sethi 01 July 2007

Love is a mixture of both the reality and dream. The experience of loving and being loved has been powerfully expressed by you. Keep it up, Patricia

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Melvina Germain 20 June 2007

This is a lovely piece of poetry Patricia, the intertwining of dreams and reality, beautiful indeed. I thoroughly enjoyed the read Patricia.--melvina--

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Duncan Wyllie 22 April 2007

You know, just maybe there could merge for you Patricia A lovely piece again from you Take care Love duncan x

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David Taylor 19 April 2007

Virtual reality of Dreams can come true, but often fleetingly it seems, Eternity in a moment, but how to make it eternally true?

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Theodora Onken 18 April 2007

Loved this and if that is a pic of you, what a living Doll you are...looks like auburn hair, too! Love your writing! Blessings, Theo

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