Dreams Poem by Thampi KEE

Dreams

Rating: 4.5


some words for you to hum along
the sound so sweet and soft to sing

the soul of dear, may wandering through
the sandal world of silent woods,
not listening to summer breeze
staring at blue old sky of us

never ask this wind to sing
I wonder what they're thinking of
just thinking of, passing of our life
still looking for thy long lost love

I will ask the moon above to say
to bring you love, a night and a day
and a touch so sweet and a true warm
fun, I wish so warm again...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 April 2015

Fantastic presentation. Wonderful imagery. Lovely poem. Many thanks.

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Fabrizio Frosini 22 March 2015

''never ask this wind to sing'' enchanting line

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 21 March 2015

I am just beginning to read your poetry page. You don't seem to have written anything of late. So, I picked this poem, the first in the list. It is a lovely piece, a cask of honey. Enjoyed. (10)

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Salini Nair 18 November 2014

beautiful poem....nicely presented

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Paul Sebastian 20 October 2014

A lovely poem of a lover! Your bring some clear pictures through your words.A lovely write.

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The poem on love that dreams of the loved one's presence has catchingly been written.

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Queeny Gona 14 July 2016

A dream, so elegant in holding the readers to ponder on.

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Lovely lines that loaded with love!

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Simone Inez Harriman 15 November 2015

Beautiful poem Thampi. A peaceful, almost a serene lullaby of love and sweet dreams.....10

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Bharati Nayak 30 August 2015

Dream is where hearts sing and poems spring..It is our blissful land where all our desires fulfilled.Beautiful poem on dream.Thank you for sharing.- - -

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