Drowsy Illusion Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Drowsy Illusion



[Dedicated to my friend poet Aijaz Asif]

Drowsy illusion
Infatuation
Like love

Word-word game
Architect of dream
Anomalous

Roaming heart
Tired burn-out
Pain ruins

Fled away
From unkind life
Drowsy illusion

Sunday, June 21, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: infatuation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 21 June 2009

There is no running away from delusion until and unless we recognize that it exists, nicely penned!

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Powerful imageries from a deep imagination.10.

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Rakesh Bedi 21 June 2009

Fled away.....; from one illusion to another! But my friend, truth is hidden somewhere between illusions n delusions! ! !

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Catrina Heart 21 June 2009

WOW! ! ! another master piece and fine dedication to a great poet too....lovely theme about life........10/10

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a beautiful poem, gently penned

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Reshma Ramesh 22 June 2009

great words well crafted with a subtle message..........

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Wojja Fink 22 June 2009

more sober than a judge, wise poem, great title says it all.....John

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Sandra Fowler 22 June 2009

Excellent imagery. I agree with Amaryllis. A very unique dedication. Kind regards, Sandra.

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Yelena M. 21 June 2009

A unique dedication..Simply yet very powerfully expressed..Thanks for sharing! Best wishes. A.

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Brishti Mazumdar 21 June 2009

Drowsy illusion Infatuation Like love ....................... Fled away From unkind life Drowsy illusion . ...liked your expression.Wonderful thought process...10+ - Brishti

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