Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 26,613 Points (17.03.1965)

Dying To Die - Poem by Lyn Paul

Running from life
There
Seems to be, just no way out

Yet there is!

That question
Those left behind
Want to know

We are born to live
Yet Many, just want to die
They've Given up
Or maybe...
They've never been living

That question
Those left suffering
Keep asking

Is living so bad?
To just throw it all away
If you could see the hole you would leave
Would you still leave us?

How could you not know
The love I have for you....
We were laughing
Just yesterday

Life's Purpose
Is not pain
It's to explore
For nothing, .. is worth dying for

Not Love
Not Anger
Not Loss
Not Debt

Never Give Up
Let someone in to share your load

No Parent wants to bury their child

I so wish.....
I wish
I could just.....
Hold your hand


Let nature
Just take its course



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March 27th 2015
Lyn Paul

Topic(s) of this poem: change, death, love, pain, suicide


Poet's Notes about The Poem

ALWAYS REMEMBER THAT BEAUTIFUL SONG...'LEAN ON ME WHEN YOUR NOT STRONG' ALWAYS!

Comments about Dying To Die by Lyn Paul

  • (4/22/2015 2:32:00 AM)


    A great message in this well written piece, Lyn. A problem shared is a problem halved. I like it. (Report) Reply

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (4/17/2015 11:50:00 AM)


    Simply Beautiful flow of words, a light you can see even in darkness of night. Never give up the life - -is the beautiful and positive message conveyed through this poem.
    A Powerful write from your pen. Loved reading it.
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  • Aqua Flower (4/5/2015 9:06:00 PM)


    Shivers run through me as I read these painful words of a soul broken in life. These very real feelings that people do have and struggle with. You've opened that door to a little light to their darkness in this heartfelt poem! A poem to open eyes to life and it's worth! (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (4/1/2015 3:37:00 PM)


    Life is for living, but bad does happen to people and we all need to be there for one another to listen to their pain and give support to them when they feel so depressed. A poem full of hope as you shine a light in the darkness that is suicide.
    Beautiful write Lyn!
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  • Rajesh Thankappan (3/31/2015 12:17:00 PM)


    Life is the gift of God and no living being, except man, thinks of committing suicide. You have very rightly pointed out that life's purpose is to explore and under whatever circumstance a man may be, he should not premediate death. A very beautiful poem exalting life. (Report) Reply

  • (3/31/2015 10:12:00 AM)


    A poem of powerful hope, very well done. (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (3/30/2015 8:27:00 PM)


    So many parents suffer; a heartbreaking poem Lyn. (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (3/28/2015 1:08:00 AM)


    Truly said, God has created man with a purpos to live on earth.Pain follows joy and joy follows pain. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/27/2015 3:38:00 PM)


    Very nicely and aptly envisioned. A beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. ........10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 27, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 9, 2015


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