Bonnie Collins

Rookie - 17 Points (February 27 1947 / Middletown New York)

Echo Of My Heart - Poem by Bonnie Collins

Each and every night we would
meet at the lighthouse of love

We would hold each other till
the early morning hours and pray
god would give us just one more moment

On the cliff's edge is where we both
had to walk different ways, each knowing
the other would walk alone with only
the distant sounds of the empty waves
crashing into the rocks below

Oh its been so many many nights since
the nightly trip to the lighthouse, but the
memory that is witheld in the halls of its
harbor will remain an echo of my heart......


Comments about Echo Of My Heart by Bonnie Collins

  • (2/8/2009 2:53:00 PM)


    oh Bonnie this is fabulous! i love it! as always it brings me so much peace, reading your poems.... lovely bonnie.

    love always,
    Ana Lia
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  • (11/16/2008 2:06:00 AM)


    I was just reading your poem 'Echo of my Heart' and it is truly beautiful. The cliff edge and the lighthouse of love evoke a dramatic mood. I loved it. I wondered if you would like to read a couple of my poems the first using echo called 'Fading Echo' about my son when a teenager who like most teenagers was very distant at that time. Also my poem 'Fountain of Grief' as that is the loss of someone also as you went through. I would love to share them with you and see what you think.
    Thanks and God Bless Karin Anderson
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  • (9/21/2008 3:38:00 PM)


    Bonnie,

    This poem is a wonderment - fabulous writing here... just a gorgeous atmosphere you have created. The lines are like platinum... loved it!


    Best to you always,

    Robert
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  • (9/16/2008 9:08:00 PM)


    The echo of your heart has deafened my ears! (Report) Reply

  • (7/1/2008 12:41:00 PM)


    This poem is astounding. It seems like there is only half a metaphor in the knowledge of walking away from one another, the presence of that lonely parting, and yet that only leaves the poem more open and more human. (Report) Reply

  • (6/30/2008 11:30:00 PM)


    Very nicely written...enjoyed it very much!
    -Michael
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  • Andrew Blakemore (6/25/2008 5:48:00 PM)


    A very beautiful poem Bonnie, lovely descriptive qualities. Love, Andrew x (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/18/2008 12:41:00 AM)


    The mellifluously smoothe flow of this poem, is virtually tranquilizing....Beautiful mastery of ambiance employment....as your select choice of vernacular, places the reader in that lighthouse...in your echo....and within its aural dance.Excellent Work, lass!

    ~ FjR ~
    ..2008..
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  • (6/18/2008 12:35:00 AM)


    nice write....indeed memories remain as echo in heart.

    Fahim
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 17, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, July 7, 2008


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