Ecstasy You Want Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

I like you're thoughts you write nicely.. Nice poem Krista

nice passionate write..welldone..10

amorous lines...well done.

Excellent use of simile. Praise for your rich imagination. Kind regards, Sandra

waa wt a romantic lines......lines soaked in honey dews hmmmm.....lovable sebastine....

My comment could be only that one of transcribing the list of the authors who have just commented. They are good authors, two of them have written lines following the same track. When romantic themes are well managed, the results are appreciable.

for the ecstasy you want for the ecstay you want i pour from my soulful eyes unending love as you lift your gaze now and then to look at the quivering lips and then rush back to the eternal script for the ecstasy you want i pour from my lips unending kiss as your lift your head now and then for air and then rush back to the parted dips for the ecstasy you want i pour from my soft bosom unending warmth as you lift your head now and then to plant the kisses they beg and then rush back to the rounded eclipse for the ecstasy you want for the ecstasy you want

whirl, swirl oscillate and then wow fall on to your lap and then u gonna breathe life kiss--ecstasy great thoughts and feelings very warm and intense ++++++++10 anjali

Great read, romantic and well expressed, 10 Lynda xx