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'Ego'

Rating: 5.0
My words this time, are from the hip,
Emotions felt, my ego stripped.
Realizing now, the pain I've caused, the heart's I've broke,
Are serious and real, not some joke.
It was never a game, yet I still played,
Now, the consequences must be faced for the mistake I made.
Forgiveness I ask, for the human stain,
Rebuilding the trust...
Only time will tell, for healing heart's sake,
I must refrain.
A man needs to know his limitations, keeping his priorities straight,
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes... us guys can really screw things up! This was one of those times.
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COMMENTS
Kanav Justa 28 November 2012
lots of things gets screwd up because of ego, , , excellent written, , , , ,
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Kelly Seale 30 September 2012
My thanks to Without Wax, Rachel Nichols and Valerie Dohren, your comments/reviews are so important to me, to all of us writers... You are my sustance, without You, Your words... I would surely starve...; -) -Kelly.
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Valerie Dohren 30 September 2012
And it takes a strong man (or woman) to acknowledge their screw-ups, so well done you, not only for this excellent write, but also for the message within it.
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Valerie Dohren 30 September 2012
And it takes a strong man (or woman) to acknowledge their screw-ups, so well done you, not only for this excellent write, but also for the message within it.
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Without Wax 20 September 2012
wow.. its beautiful.. the rhyme and the message.. its hard to find a poet achieving both.. but you did
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Kelly Seale 12 August 2012
Thank you Vanessa, You are the first to comment on this write, and evry time someone makes a comment on any of the, I re-read that in which was written, to better inhale the words of others, their points of view and thoughts- it is so important to me. I treasure your review and am glad this one touched you so. It was very hard to write, for being honest with ones self, peeling away the layers so to speak- is not an easy task to do. Thank you Vanessa! ! ! -Kelly.
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Vanessa Hughes 12 August 2012
I believe one of the best things we can do for ourselves and the people around us, is to lose our ego. I love this poem Kelly, very well written x
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