Unwritten Soul


Forgive You - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Forgive you
It is not hard to forgive you
Transparent heart, i know who are you
It is okay to forgive you
Need no reason, just forgive you

Pains u gave me, smiles i give you
Hates can stab me, please not to you
You innocent in the eyes of anger
Truth will be seen a bit longer
Never mind how deep you cut my skin
Never mind how bloody heart i felt in
I just can't hate you
Everything u do, forgive you

I need to save you from dark
So just give me all your pain
Cleanse your suffering marks
I'll wipe away your trouble not to stain

Then, when a chance came to me
Finally i have to leave you
Doesn't mean grudge buried me
But no chance to tell you
When truth comes tell everything
Don't feel regret or bad feeling
I told you, i forgive you
But now forgive me for leaving you
Only one thing i want you always do
Smile as sincere u can do
We still friend, promise you, i do..
Forgave you, now Forgive me

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the inspiration by people and imagination Don't shy to say
sorry, don't feel difficult to forgive..the ego only kill the
beauty of life In everything we do, don't let emotion enclose intuition

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Comments about Forgive You by Unwritten Soul

  • Jazib Kamalvi (8/4/2017 10:13:00 AM)


    A nice poetic imagination. It is not easy to forgive immediately but very easy for a humanist. Thank you very much, (Report) Reply

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  • Tom Allport (8/3/2017 5:46:00 AM)


    a wonderful poem of words of wisdom to live better lives? .............beautifully written US (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (7/30/2017 7:46:00 AM)


    Forgiveness is a divine word that can heal the agony and brings friendship among two. Words like sorry, excuse me and forgive me etc. bring forgiveness and happiness. Dear Soul, you have so nicely painted this in your poem. It may be quoted some lines... Forgiveness: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
    the inspiration by people and imagination Don't shy to say
    sorry, don't feel difficult to forgive..the ego only kill the
    beauty of life In everything we do, don't let emotion enclose intuition
    Thanks for sharing.
    (Report) Reply

  • (7/21/2017 2:42:00 PM)


    Is there any more loving, healing act than that of forgiveness?
    What could be more godly?
    A most meaningful piece!
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  • (6/24/2017 9:57:00 PM)


    Healing can only begin once forgiveness happens. Your poem so eloquently expresses the process. Simply profound! Kudos. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (6/25/2017 1:14:00 AM)

    You are true, forgiveness is the bridge over trouble water...merci for great input here n merci, merci Richard for your kind. J'adore your kind advice here.

  • Genova Maaa (6/23/2017 6:28:00 AM)


    Forgiveness is a heavenly theme. every where in all religious literature we find it.
    thank you for writing a poem on forgiveness.. thank you dear poetess. Genova
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    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (6/23/2017 7:04:00 AM)

    Thank you for your support and kind words, forgiveness is something everyone need and everyone can give... Though it still a choice for us to give or hold. Thank u :)

  • Muzahidul Reza (12/1/2016 12:49:00 PM)


    Forgive you
    It is not hard to forgive you

    excellent poem in wonderful words, thank you for sharing this poem with us
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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/23/2016 2:43:00 PM)


    How nicely the poet asks to forgive but before that he forgives one who is asked to forgive. A great poem on forgiveness. (Report) Reply

  • Rebecca Navarre (10/23/2016 10:45:00 PM)


    You have a Powerful Message in Your Comments as Well As Your Poetry! ! ! Thank YOU! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rebecca Navarre (10/23/2016 8:12:00 PM)


    Added to my List! ! ! Please Always Keep Writing! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rebecca Navarre (10/23/2016 8:09:00 PM)


    Brings Tears to my Eyes! ! ! In a Beautiful! Melancholy! Sentimental! Way! ! ! What a Inspiring and Precious
    Poem! ! ! So Very Much needed for All! ! ! Forgiveness Both ways Frees! Even if we are the only one who can/will
    say I Forgive You! Believe All Is Forgiven in the end with a Sincere Heart! ! ! As You Do! ! ! Thank You So Much
    For Sharing! ! !
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    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (10/23/2016 10:16:00 PM)

    Yes i have some connection to this old poem of mine, where we have to move on and to forgive but at same time we cant tell and explain...just let time reveal the truth if it really want to. I always think that its okay to keep it like that because the truth never change the fact or history although people misjudge us...then sometimes i just rather stay away to focus what life still offer..i believe all of us have the same thing.. Thanks for always supporting me it really mean a lot Rebecca... Wish you the best too :)

  • Diane Montemayor (6/12/2016 9:04:00 AM)


    Dear Sir,

    Forgiveness, we do this not just to forgive them but a way to moving on.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Sincerely ,
    Diane
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/18/2016 6:07:00 AM)


    Never mind how deep you cut my skin
    Never mind how bloody heart i felt in
    I just can't hate you
    Everything u do, forgive you............ in the poets notes you wrote how our ego blinds us....... that is a beautiful thought.......... forgiving is a divine abilty. when you forgive, God lives in you dear poetess. tony
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/13/2016 10:02:00 AM)


    Forgiveness! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (3/9/2016 11:50:00 PM)


    Though written in a personal tone, the poem has universal appeal.Forgiveness like kindness is one of the most beautiful attributes of a person.It heals the wounds and binds the souls.Thanks for sharing this marvelous poem. (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (3/7/2016 10:42:00 PM)


    Powerful poem! I shall find a way to forgive also. Sigh, If we could have a vacuum to take out all the pain, to have a span and spick soul again.. (Report) Reply

  • Simone Inez Harriman (3/3/2016 10:45:00 AM)


    Such lovely words:

    'Pains u gave me, smiles i give you
    Hates can stab me, please not to you
    You innocent in the eyes of anger
    Truth will be seen a bit longer'

    So wisely said......10
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  • Umar Hashmi (11/21/2015 9:03:00 AM)


    It's better to forgive and forget........... (Report) Reply

  • (5/31/2015 8:06:00 AM)


    The divine forgiveness is always there if someone is ready to ask sorry by admitting the blender happened. But it is sad to note that such a great value is diminishing in the society. I feel this poem opens up the eyes and make humans to say, simple sorry when someone is hurt by his or her attitude. I give 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Jitesh Shah (4/5/2015 10:48:00 AM)


    very nice and i like your poem and also read my poems (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 7, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, September 9, 2011


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