Unwritten Soul


Forgive You - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Forgive you
It is not hard to forgive you
Transparent heart, i know who are you
It is okay to forgive you
Need no reason, just forgive you

Pains u gave me, smiles i give you
Hates can stab me, please not to you
You innocent in the eyes of anger
Truth will be seen a bit longer
Never mind how deep you cut my skin
Never mind how bloody heart i felt in
I just can't hate you
Everything u do, forgive you

I need to save you from dark
So just give me all your pain
Cleanse your suffering marks
I'll wipe away your trouble not to stain

Then, when a chance came to me
Finally i have to leave you
Doesn't mean grudge buried me
But no chance to tell you
When truth comes tell everything
Don't feel regret or bad feeling
I told you, i forgive you
But now forgive me for leaving you
Only one thing i want you always do
Smile as sincere u can do
We still friend, promise you, i do..
Forgave you, now Forgive me

: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : Theme: Forgiveness: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
the inspiration by people and imagination Don't shy to say
sorry, don't feel difficult to forgive..the ego only kill the
beauty of life In everything we do, don't let emotion enclose intuition

................................ ................................................. .......


Comments about Forgive You by Unwritten Soul

  • (11/7/2018 9:47:00 AM)

    So nice poem.....I like it...... (Report)Reply

    (11/7/2018 11:33:00 AM)

    Thank u Bhagabat, thanks for spending time reading it. Hope u enjoy your diwali.

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Dev Anand (7/26/2018 5:06:00 AM)

    Pains u gave me, smiles i give you
    Hates can stab me, please not to you
    You innocent in the eyes of anger
    Truth will be seen a bit longer. forgiving is heavenly dear poetess. dev
    (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Hazel Durham (10/15/2017 7:35:00 AM)

    Outstanding write, to still love a person even though they did you wrong is to bring peace and harmony into your life, love only prospers in finding happiness and to have the wisdom to move on with your beautiful heart intact! (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/10/2017 9:40:00 PM)

    Forgiveness is a nice spiritual value. This poem on forgiveness is very tender and nice. Truth comes tell everything clearly ever. Revisiting this poem values more. (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Dev Anand (8/29/2017 4:08:00 PM)

    I just can't hate you
    Everything u do, forgive you
    the ego only kill the
    beauty of life In everything we do, these re revealing words . forgiving is heavenly. only a person with a godly heart can forgive.. thank you dear poetess for this poem.. dev
    (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Hazel Durham (8/20/2017 4:08:00 AM)

    To forgive is to savour the joy to live free from hate, envy, jealously and bitterness, a beautifully written poem with an inspirational message and thank you for sharing! (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Jazib Kamalvi (8/4/2017 10:13:00 AM)

    A nice poetic imagination. It is not easy to forgive immediately but very easy for a humanist. Thank you very much, (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (8/3/2017 5:46:00 AM)

    a wonderful poem of words of wisdom to live better lives? .............beautifully written US (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Kumarmani Mahakul (7/30/2017 7:46:00 AM)

    Forgiveness is a divine word that can heal the agony and brings friendship among two. Words like sorry, excuse me and forgive me etc. bring forgiveness and happiness. Dear Soul, you have so nicely painted this in your poem. It may be quoted some lines... Forgiveness: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
    the inspiration by people and imagination Don't shy to say
    sorry, don't feel difficult to forgive..the ego only kill the
    beauty of life In everything we do, don't let emotion enclose intuition
    Thanks for sharing.
    (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (6/24/2017 9:57:00 PM)

    Healing can only begin once forgiveness happens. Your poem so eloquently expresses the process. Simply profound! Kudos. (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(6/25/2017 1:14:00 AM)

    You are true, forgiveness is the bridge over trouble water...merci for great input here n merci, merci Richard for your kind. J'adore your kind advice here.

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Genova Maaa (6/23/2017 6:28:00 AM)

    Forgiveness is a heavenly theme. every where in all religious literature we find it.
    thank you for writing a poem on forgiveness.. thank you dear poetess. Genova
    (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(6/23/2017 7:04:00 AM)

    Thank you for your support and kind words, forgiveness is something everyone need and everyone can give... Though it still a choice for us to give or hold. Thank u :)

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Muzahidul Reza (12/1/2016 12:49:00 PM)

    Forgive you
    It is not hard to forgive you

    excellent poem in wonderful words, thank you for sharing this poem with us
    (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Akhtar Jawad (11/23/2016 2:43:00 PM)

    How nicely the poet asks to forgive but before that he forgives one who is asked to forgive. A great poem on forgiveness. (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rebecca Navarre (10/23/2016 10:45:00 PM)

    You have a Powerful Message in Your Comments as Well As Your Poetry! ! ! Thank YOU! ! ! (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rebecca Navarre (10/23/2016 8:12:00 PM)

    Added to my List! ! ! Please Always Keep Writing! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

    2 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rebecca Navarre (10/23/2016 8:09:00 PM)

    Brings Tears to my Eyes! ! ! In a Beautiful! Melancholy! Sentimental! Way! ! ! What a Inspiring and Precious
    Poem! ! ! So Very Much needed for All! ! ! Forgiveness Both ways Frees! Even if we are the only one who can/will
    say I Forgive You! Believe All Is Forgiven in the end with a Sincere Heart! ! ! As You Do! ! ! Thank You So Much
    For Sharing! ! !
    (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(10/23/2016 10:16:00 PM)

    Yes i have some connection to this old poem of mine, where we have to move on and to forgive but at same time we cant tell and explain...just let time reveal the truth if it really want to. I always think that its okay to keep it like that because the truth never change the fact or history although people misjudge us...then sometimes i just rather stay away to focus what life still offer..i believe all of us have the same thing.. Thanks for always supporting me it really mean a lot Rebecca... Wish you the best too :)

    2 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Diane Montemayor (6/12/2016 9:04:00 AM)

    Dear Sir,

    Forgiveness, we do this not just to forgive them but a way to moving on.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Sincerely ,
    Diane
    (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    1 person did not like.
  • Drtony Brahmin (5/18/2016 6:07:00 AM)

    Never mind how deep you cut my skin
    Never mind how bloody heart i felt in
    I just can't hate you
    Everything u do, forgive you............ in the poets notes you wrote how our ego blinds us....... that is a beautiful thought.......... forgiving is a divine abilty. when you forgive, God lives in you dear poetess. tony
    (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    1 person did not like.
  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/13/2016 10:02:00 AM)

    Forgiveness! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    1 person did not like.
  • Bharati Nayak (3/9/2016 11:50:00 PM)

    Though written in a personal tone, the poem has universal appeal.Forgiveness like kindness is one of the most beautiful attributes of a person.It heals the wounds and binds the souls.Thanks for sharing this marvelous poem. (Report)Reply

    1 person liked.
    1 person did not like.
Read all 51 comments »




Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 7, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, September 9, 2011


Famous Poems

  1. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  3. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  4. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  5. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  6. Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  7. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  8. Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep
    Mary Elizabeth Frye
  9. I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You
    Pablo Neruda
  10. Television
    Roald Dahl
[Report Error]