Unwritten Soul


Forgive You

Poem by Unwritten Soul

Forgive you
It is not hard to forgive you
Transparent heart, i know who are you
It is okay to forgive you
Need no reason, just forgive you

Pains u gave me, smiles i give you
Hates can stab me, please not to you
You innocent in the eyes of anger
Truth will be seen a bit longer
Never mind how deep you cut my skin
Never mind how bloody heart i felt in
I just can't hate you
Everything u do, forgive you

I need to save you from dark
So just give me all your pain
Cleanse your suffering marks
I'll wipe away your trouble not to stain

Then, when a chance came to me
Finally i have to leave you
Doesn't mean grudge buried me
But no chance to tell you
When truth comes tell everything
Don't feel regret or bad feeling
I told you, i forgive you
But now forgive me for leaving you
Only one thing i want you always do
Smile as sincere u can do
We still friend, promise you, i do..
Forgave you, now Forgive me

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the inspiration by people and imagination Don't shy to say
sorry, don't feel difficult to forgive..the ego only kill the
beauty of life In everything we do, don't let emotion enclose intuition

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Comments about Forgive You by Unwritten Soul

  • Michael McparlandMichael Mcparland (7/2/2020 9:37:00 AM)

    A very wonderful poem.(Report)Reply

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  • Ronald G WilliamsRonald G Williams (7/1/2020 6:22:00 PM)

    Very nice poem on forgiveness.

    I would invite you to read my poems (I have five of them)
    but my account is new and Poem Hunter has not activated them yet.
    I don't understand this. I thought people would be able to read them at once when they were posted!(Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (3/4/2020 4:30:00 AM)

    beautiful poem penned and beautiful poetic theme -
    yeah right you are that the ego only kill the
    beauty of life/// great writing(Report)Reply

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  • Anjandev Roy (2/8/2020 8:18:00 AM)

    Wonderful piece. Lovely to read. anjandev roy.(Report)Reply

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  • A B Faniki (8/31/2019 12:05:00 PM)

    I can relate. Thanks for sharing such amazimg poem.(Report)Reply

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  • Mj Lemon (6/5/2019 11:51:00 AM)

    Life and relationships do begin at the moment of forgiveness. This is profound verse, Soul. Magnificent.(Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (5/30/2019 6:07:00 AM)

    I need to save you from dark
    So just give me all your pain
    Cleanse your suffering marks
    I'll wipe away your trouble not to stain.....so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem on forgiveness has been astutely delineated.(Report)Reply

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  • Bhagabat prasad hotta (11/7/2018 9:47:00 AM)

    So nice poem.....I like it......(Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(11/7/2018 11:33:00 AM)

    Thank u Bhagabat, thanks for spending time reading it. Hope u enjoy your diwali.

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  • Dev AnandDev Anand (7/26/2018 5:06:00 AM)

    Pains u gave me, smiles i give you
    Hates can stab me, please not to you
    You innocent in the eyes of anger
    Truth will be seen a bit longer. forgiving is heavenly dear poetess. dev(Report)Reply

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  • Hazel DurhamHazel Durham (10/15/2017 7:35:00 AM)

    Outstanding write, to still love a person even though they did you wrong is to bring peace and harmony into your life, love only prospers in finding happiness and to have the wisdom to move on with your beautiful heart intact!(Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (10/10/2017 9:40:00 PM)

    Forgiveness is a nice spiritual value. This poem on forgiveness is very tender and nice. Truth comes tell everything clearly ever. Revisiting this poem values more.(Report)Reply

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  • Dev AnandDev Anand (8/29/2017 4:08:00 PM)

    I just can't hate you
    Everything u do, forgive you
    the ego only kill the
    beauty of life In everything we do, these re revealing words . forgiving is heavenly. only a person with a godly heart can forgive.. thank you dear poetess for this poem.. dev(Report)Reply

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  • Hazel DurhamHazel Durham (8/20/2017 4:08:00 AM)

    To forgive is to savour the joy to live free from hate, envy, jealously and bitterness, a beautifully written poem with an inspirational message and thank you for sharing!(Report)Reply

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  • Jazib KamalviJazib Kamalvi (8/4/2017 10:13:00 AM)

    A nice poetic imagination. It is not easy to forgive immediately but very easy for a humanist. Thank you very much,(Report)Reply

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  • Tom Allport (8/3/2017 5:46:00 AM)

    a wonderful poem of words of wisdom to live better lives? .............beautifully written US(Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (7/30/2017 7:46:00 AM)

    Forgiveness is a divine word that can heal the agony and brings friendship among two. Words like sorry, excuse me and forgive me etc. bring forgiveness and happiness. Dear Soul, you have so nicely painted this in your poem. It may be quoted some lines... Forgiveness: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
    the inspiration by people and imagination Don't shy to say
    sorry, don't feel difficult to forgive..the ego only kill the
    beauty of life In everything we do, don't let emotion enclose intuition
    Thanks for sharing.(Report)Reply

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  • Richard Wlodarski (6/24/2017 9:57:00 PM)

    Healing can only begin once forgiveness happens. Your poem so eloquently expresses the process. Simply profound! Kudos.(Report)Reply

    Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul(6/25/2017 1:14:00 AM)

    You are true, forgiveness is the bridge over trouble water...merci for great input here n merci, merci Richard for your kind. J'adore your kind advice here.

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  • Genova MaaaGenova Maaa (6/23/2017 6:28:00 AM)

    Forgiveness is a heavenly theme. every where in all religious literature we find it.
    thank you for writing a poem on forgiveness.. thank you dear poetess. Genova(Report)Reply

    Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul(6/23/2017 7:04:00 AM)

    Thank you for your support and kind words, forgiveness is something everyone need and everyone can give... Though it still a choice for us to give or hold. Thank u :)

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  • Muzahidul RezaMuzahidul Reza (12/1/2016 12:49:00 PM)

    Forgive you
    It is not hard to forgive you

    excellent poem in wonderful words, thank you for sharing this poem with us(Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/23/2016 2:43:00 PM)

    How nicely the poet asks to forgive but before that he forgives one who is asked to forgive. A great poem on forgiveness.(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 7, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, September 9, 2011