Elegy For My Soul Comments

The crying..........dying soul..................wanting for a replenishment.anyones? ? ? ?

The ruthless world drowns all hopes....thus kills the inner warrior, defeats our will and leaves us in an ocean of disppointment! ! ! A thoughtful write...thanks for sharing!

this poem is touching my deepest heart.. great job..

This is a deep and very introspective poem. 'Fought peacefully on his will's behalf' is an outstanding line, Well done. Jim

wow thats deep, very good though. It really paints a picture for the readers and helps us to understand what is being expressed. keep up the good work +10 :)

nicely conceived, i voted 10

Extrem pain or mental distress shown in ths poem wit powerful words...

Like putting a string around your finger, as a reminder for something. Though not the harsh realities of life.

A melancholy of words. A kind of jittering of the troubled mind. A nice piece.

Although I can appreciate the sentiment, and agony, depicted in your very stirring words, I found a rough and jagged read, that deserved a much smoother flow. great expression and imagery. it is a good piece.

A beautiful poem. It was well expressed. Keep it up.10+++

is it the agony or...whatever...soul is soul to be controlled... you hv your own version of interpritation... good to share with us.. shaff

i, d rather say...be cool, keep calm.....wait until ull not be confused..

The poem pregnant with thoughts. It is the crisis of the deaf culture.... It never dumps, it always jumps, we have no ear, we have our own fears, whole life is tears and jeers. CP

wonderful thoughts...awakening write.. lamentation of your soul...great reflections... a conscience talking....great write.....10++++

'There recedes the voice, Voice of the dumb, Left with it's flesh and bone, Borne to mourn'... beautiful expression Vignesh...real painful words...good reflective write...10

conscience of your soul..dictates with meaningful thoughts..great poem...10