Entwined Hearts Poem by Practicing Poetess

Entwined Hearts

Rating: 4.3


With all the many things
We've shared
And all the times we both
Have cared
A part of you has grown
In me
And so you see, we're meant
To be
Together forever, and
Never apart
Maybe in distance, but
Never in heart.

Friday, May 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: destiny,heart love,soul mates
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Hansell 15 October 2017

I love this poem. It flows so very nice and smooth. Keep up the great work. A very enjoyable read.

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Practicing Poetess 15 October 2017

Thank you so much, Ray. It always fascinates me when men appreciate love poetry! I read some of your poems, and sent a couple messages to your inbox where members can mail each other. They were sent October 7th. Please check for them, because I can try to re-send if for some reason they didn't go through.

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Queeny Gona 19 May 2017

Awesome lines! Never apart Maybe in distance, but Never in heart. Though separated by long distance, let us always be together in heart! Enjoyed the read!

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Thank you, Queeny, for reading and replying! But most of all, for enjoying! And, speaking of hearts, you have a good one! Do take care now.

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Dr. Yahya 13 May 2017

A beautiful shade of love. Thank you for sharing.

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Thank you, Dr. Yahya, for reading and commenting! I appreciate your kind description!

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Barry Middleton 13 May 2017

Very well done. I really like this one. We are very lucky if we have a soul mate in our lives.

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Thank you, Barry, for your faithful and positive comments! Being a writer yourself, it should not surprise you to hear the backstory on this one. I discovered an old fragment of a poem I'd begun years ago, tucked between the pages of a favourite book. What a little gem! I thought. Wonder why I never finished it? So I did, gave it a title, and I'm very pleased with the result. It's short, but I think it packs a lot of meaning into a few words. I think it would make a good Valentine's poem! When I think of all the snippets of poetry that I've misplaced throughout the years.... Anyway, I'm in process of organising all my poetry. Have a wonderful Saturday! :)

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