Eulogy Poem by Magic Box

Eulogy

Rating: 5.0


For my thousand dreams and broken wing,
As some final words what would you sing?

How gentle I was or how righteous my acts,
In midst of strong winds how I stayed intact!

How much I loved and how I’ll be missed,
How boldly I saw death and gently kissed,

What would you say? The truth or some lie?
While mourning for me when I simply die?

Silence will win where life looses the game,
Unspoken words cause tears from my frame!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Definitely I wont be there. So I just want to hear beforehand!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adheez Van Der Beanthz 19 August 2013

interesting theme and interesting way to express it i love your imagery, what can i say, its tender but wild and your words, simple but meaningful very good works

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Kavya . 16 August 2013

why do u want to hear beforehand! Magic Box, u simply think out of the box, very much out of the box, ur wild imaginations and innovative writes I really admire......but I have no answers for the questions u have posted above, as i feel its too early to comment..........May God grant u a long life of health wealth and happiness and may ur mood swings be in control............

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Indranil Bhaduri 16 August 2013

Beautifully written.. Well done

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Valerie Dohren 15 August 2013

A very well written poem asking a big question - we would all like to believe people will think and speak well of us after we arevgone.

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Heather Wilkins 14 August 2013

nice poem written in couplets. enjoyed

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chelce 12 December 2018

wow i love this poem its a magic i hope get a 100 on my drama test

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Kanav Justa 17 December 2013

like the theme you wrote on, , , , you way to express your poems is great, , , , , specia; ; y the last two lines in this poem were very powerful, , , you have a lot of creativity inside you, , , always keep penning, , ,

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Lyn Paul 18 October 2013

Magic, I loved reading your poet notes and thank you for being so open. Your Eulogy is superb which I have saved. I have been a Funeral director and a celebrant attending many Funerals. I feel at peace within the cemeteries yet I am not ready to pass on until my time is ready. For I believe I am really needed on this earth. Just as you are!

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Chandana Khan 28 August 2013

he had 1000 dreams and broken wings like all other human beings but he was loved and respected by all due to his goodness as i can C in his a few poems. he luvd his country and he wrote neat poems. im sure i wil need to say it after 10,000 years dear big brother.i wsh u live more and write more :))) 10 marks 4 ds.

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Nikita Dutt 23 August 2013

they are some stunning words put together... love the last lines.. Silence will win where life looses the game, Unspoken words cause tears from my frame!

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