Magic Box

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Opening Magic Box - Poem by Magic Box

I'd hold your hand then,
As soft as touching a newborn's fingers,
I'd feel sweatdrops in our palms,
Cherishing pure magic in us that lingers!

A few steps and tango turn,
Your arms on my shoulders, Mine on your waist,
I'd look at your eyes glowing,
A peck on your sweet lips, without any haste!

You'd smile under my breath,
I'd let my hands go through your forehead,
I'd whisper in those ears,
In shyness, your cheeks would turn red!

Closer and closer, knowing our hearts,
We'd be at a beginning, a new moon above
You'll own me, as I'd make you mine
We will let the world see, that we're in love! ! !

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Magic box is filled with love! ! ! As I write this (I'm sitting inside a bus) I'm grinning like a 2 year old! ! And people look at me! ! Oh my God! Why can't time fly? Or at least make me fly! Wait a minute.. I'm already flying right?

Comments about Opening Magic Box by Magic Box

  • (3/18/2015 3:35:00 AM)

    A delightfully enchanting poem, filled with romantic love and hope. Great write! Thank you, RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • Patricia Grantham (12/17/2014 8:40:00 AM)

    I enjoyed your sweet romantic poem. Full
    of love and enchantment.Nice.
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  • Sankar Sehanabis (2/21/2014 2:28:00 AM)

    A beautiful Magic Box with lots of rose............ brilliant expression...........Nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (12/31/2013 10:49:00 AM)

    Reading this I too feel a kind of thrill. May your love flourish day by day and may your life become an eternal song! !

    Have a great New Year of wish fulfillment and all possible blessings of God! !
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  • (12/30/2013 1:58:00 PM)

    oh someone got it bad ha ha, i am so happy for you bhai may you always keep grinning like two year boy
    happy love :)
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  • Geetha Jayakumar (12/30/2013 9:55:00 AM)

    Let this beautiful poem on love keep on flowing from your Magic Box. Fantastic poem. (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2013 1:54:00 AM)

    beautiful poem of love. very nice to read (Report) Reply

  • Kavya . (12/29/2013 11:59:00 PM)

    am grinning too Aswath! so sweet and innocent wishes....i pray to God may this love bloom and continue lifelong....... (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (12/29/2013 11:16:00 PM)

    Greetings for the prayers granted and answered! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Susan Lacovara (12/29/2013 3:57:00 PM)

    Enjoy the magical flight that only love offers....PEACE (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 29, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, December 30, 2013

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