Opening Magic Box Poem by Magic Box

Opening Magic Box

Rating: 4.7


I'd hold your hand then,
As soft as touching a newborn's fingers,
I'd feel sweatdrops in our palms,
Cherishing pure magic in us that lingers!

A few steps and tango turn,
Your arms on my shoulders, Mine on your waist,
I'd look at your eyes glowing,
A peck on your sweet lips, without any haste!

You'd smile under my breath,
I'd let my hands go through your forehead,
I'd whisper in those ears,
In shyness, your cheeks would turn red!

Closer and closer, knowing our hearts,
We'd be at a beginning, a new moon above
You'll own me, as I'd make you mine
We will let the world see, that we're in love! ! !

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Magic box is filled with love! ! ! As I write this (I'm sitting inside a bus) I'm grinning like a 2 year old! ! And people look at me! ! Oh my God! Why can't time fly? Or at least make me fly! Wait a minute.. I'm already flying right?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Lacovara 29 December 2013

Enjoy the magical flight that only love offers....PEACE

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Shahzia Batool 29 December 2013

Greetings for the prayers granted and answered! ! !

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Kavya . 29 December 2013

am grinning too Aswath! so sweet and innocent wishes....i pray to God may this love bloom and continue lifelong.......

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Muhammad Ali 30 December 2013

beautiful poem of love. very nice to read

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 December 2013

Let this beautiful poem on love keep on flowing from your Magic Box. Fantastic poem.

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Roseann Shawiak 18 March 2015

A delightfully enchanting poem, filled with romantic love and hope. Great write! Thank you, RoseAnn

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Patricia Grantham 17 December 2014

I enjoyed your sweet romantic poem. Full of love and enchantment.Nice.

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Sankar Sehanabis 21 February 2014

A beautiful Magic Box with lots of rose............ brilliant expression...........Nice poem.

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Valsa George 31 December 2013

Reading this I too feel a kind of thrill. May your love flourish day by day and may your life become an eternal song! ! Have a great New Year of wish fulfillment and all possible blessings of God! !

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Payal Parande 30 December 2013

oh someone got it bad ha ha, i am so happy for you bhai may you always keep grinning like two year boy happy love :)

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