Exercise.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan
Exercise....
Pristine white
I glide
snow pure white
pristine white
also at night
you are right
to hold me tight
then I'll glide just light
it's everyone's right
to have the possibility
to glide at night
all pristine white
in the line of the light
all in solitude at night
pristine white
I like very much your white
in pristinity
pristine light
please, come to me
keep me in your company
in pristinity
obligated
never updated
constantly sublimated
set free your company
for the sake of poetry
this is the world's duty
enjoy the light
on pristine white
the global enjoyment
Montana's Resident
part of the world
I present you this
God's Bliss
in togetherness
thank you, Lord
with all there is....
Tignes le Lac, France-Swiss
Saturday the 19th of January 2019
@ 6.17 hrs. A.M. West-European Time
One night at Nancy (north of France)then the next morning to
Tignes le lac amongst Montana snow regions in Southern France
close to Switzerland, next Sunday the 27th of January on the Lord's
Day, the poetess will be back again, just these days snowboarding
and skiing in the pristine white snow, do hope her name will be still on the home page of Poem Hunter.
Thank you Lord that YOU ARE....
Tignes le Lac, Southern France
Montana Regions-Switzerland
An emotive poem. Assertive powerful words. beautifully constructed
I agree with Poet, Hans, Jr the recurring lines.in the poem make it lovelier and more fascinating. Great rhyme and imagery.
A fascinating poem that vividly depicts the wonders and beauty of pristine snow. It also brings out the power of God through the beauty of His creations: nature.
Beautiful. The repetition gives a special touch to the poem. Good!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 10:07:13 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A heartwarming poem! Well done!