top of the mountain
there is nothing above me
except for the sun
Exhilaration! top of the mountain there is nothing above me except for the sun Below is a fountain Sending pure water to sea So much fun Exhilaration!
You've got it all! The feeling, the image, the air...you really transferred us to a mountain top
Oh, my! ! ! ! You nailed the heartbeat of exhilaration in so few but well-chosen words. 10++++++++++++++++++++
You should be! ! ! ! Ah-ha! ! I figured it was you Linda Bella although tomorrow you may put on another mask- -Zorro, perhaps? Whatever, I am enjoying your poetry!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a very nice haiku, Jungle Cat. I like it!