Chuck Audette

Rookie - 59 Points (Poetry Hell, Vermont)

Explanation For Bed Wetting - Poem by Chuck Audette

It seems
the weather-filled rain
has affected my sleep
my river of dreams
was never this deep

my bed is a boat
the floor never drains
crossing the moat
the oars give me pains

my current situation
I think I am hating
my bed is all wet
and for morning I'm wading


Comments about Explanation For Bed Wetting by Chuck Audette

  • (4/18/2007 4:21:00 AM)


    Chuck,
    SO, there is NO possibility that there is a leak in the roof,
    - - - right?
    - - - or that you can blame it on a water-bed leak?
    - - - or a supposed friend 'dunked' your hand while you were snoring?
    O.K.! - - - I give up! (I tried!)

    Grab your S.C.U.B.A. gear, and head to bed!

    B.V.A.
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  • (4/14/2007 12:13:00 PM)


    I like the idea but don't understand weather-filled rain...
    rain-filled weather? yes-
    but, that's minor.
    Perhaps the dreams are recurrent from many years before when first you heard romantic wetting bells, or was that Pavlovian? Nice humorous write when I get past the hurdles of misunderstanding.
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  • (3/26/2006 9:26:00 AM)


    Worth the wait Mr A. Ironic effect of this poem is that when people read it, they'll laugh so hard...
    Hugs
    Anna xxx
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  • (3/25/2006 3:30:00 PM)


    From Poetry in Motion to this - very nice! I have to echo Linda's words, below. Go, boy, go (on posting, that is) ! ! ! Est : ] (Report) Reply

  • (3/25/2006 7:58:00 AM)


    Hey, Chuckles: What was that Billy Joel song way back - River of Dreams, I think. Chuck, you are so funny but well expressed at the same time. I enjoy your off-the-wall ideas. Scarlett (Report) Reply

  • (3/24/2006 9:55:00 PM)


    lol..what a dream Charles! hehe..

    This was a neat little poem!
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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 24, 2006



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