Fatigue Poem by Chuck Audette

Fatigue

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fatigue conquers me
running its hands along my body
reminding every ache
that it requires its tribute
only my brain and flailing fingers
cells of resistance, a dogged persistence
freedom fighters, fueled by friendly
contributions of caffeinated coffee
my stomach churns in protest
....already sided with the enemy

Tuesday, February 28, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,running
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rusty Daily 28 February 2006

Each year a new pain. Well over the hill. Fortunately the coffee still sits well. If not I would shoot myself. lol Good write on what ails us. Rusty

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Rory Hudson 15 June 2009

Well said, with lots of telling metaphors!

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alice sunderland 13 November 2006

just so very good this one. gold! al

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R H 15 April 2006

Chuck, an excellent write with effective imagery - our bodies fighting fatigue as if it were the enemy. Loved the line 'cells of resistance, a dogged persistance'. You created a wonderfully lethargic pace - how did you do that? ! Warm wishes, Justine.

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Dan Tharp 06 March 2006

I feel like this today. dan

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Esther Leclerc 28 February 2006

Can feel those hands of fatigue all over me - 'cells of resistance' calls to mind freedom fighters, a great comparison! You've captured the essence of exhaustion here... zzz

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Chuck Audette

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Poetry Hell, Vermont
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