TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

***************facets Of A Night********************

Between that sweet taste and your name in her mouth

few moments there were.

The days do not complete..

they are followed by the darkest nights..

hotness of summer followed by drought of fall.

a glance to the moon we could have..

yet before we taste any trance in a waiting night..

the beats' rhymes will be broken by the sun's light...........

a changable creatures we are...they are..

each has his reasobanle and un reasonable seasons..

each has his stages of his ages...

The cosmos lacks stability...

that internal..the external state

are exposed to the windy stromy nights...

In the poets' universe each face has many other facets................

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 3, 2009
Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 12, 2011

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  • Heather WilkinsHeather Wilkins (7/8/2013 5:58:00 AM)

    very touching and thoughtful poem.

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  • Chisomo KumwanjeChisomo Kumwanje (1/7/2013 4:12:00 AM)

    Nice poem with unique diction. Read my poems.. Chisomo Kumwanje...

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  • Antonio Liao (10/24/2012 8:13:00 PM)

    A DARING STUNT OF REALITY, EXCELLENT IN THE EDGES OF TIME AND POETRY....THE WORLD HAS TO READ THIS KIND OF THOUGHT...10/10

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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (3/18/2010 3:13:00 AM)

    I have to go through ages in these pages to see what I have written before, if any, Some times it does not matter what is written, what matters is that who has written. You are that (who) here. Add 10 more.

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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (3/18/2010 3:13:00 AM)

    I have to go through ages in these pages to see what I have written before, if any, Some times it does not matter what is written, what matters is that who has written. You are that (who) here. Add 10 more.

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  • Rafique Farooqi (11/27/2009 10:59:00 PM)

    It is very touching and thought provoking write........

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  • Rajkumar MukherjeeRajkumar Mukherjee (10/29/2009 8:52:00 AM)

    Dear TAMARA,
    Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem 'Facets of a night'.
    Its a lovely read expressed in exquisite imageries, laced with metaphorical use and superb vocabs that convey much than is apparent on first read and leaves reader to ponder over..
    I liked these lines most:
    'Yet before we taste any trance in a waiting night
    the beats' rhymes will be broken by the sun's light'
    Thought-provoking, profound line of philosophy of life
    Loved the poem Rated 10
    RAJKUMAR

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (10/29/2009 2:41:00 AM)

    this poem displays a sweet freshness compared to your many other writes Tamara...words fall fresh as dews romantic on the lines of this 'facet of a night'...thanks...10

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  • Mark NwagwuMark Nwagwu (10/28/2009 10:25:00 AM)

    in the poet's world, each face has many facets - much like Picasso's women with forty faces, each of which is real! this is a surrealistic write, Tamara. The cosmos is not stable - and we are worse, volatile even - thanks Tamara

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  • Rafique Farooqi (10/28/2009 9:40:00 AM)

    Wonderful and meaningful poem, i like this poem

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  • Ying Escalona (10/28/2009 3:52:00 AM)

    facets of a night
    sides of a circle...
    'outside and inside'

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  • Seema Aarella (10/28/2009 3:02:00 AM)

    Oh wow! ! ! ! ! ...excellent lines...last one beats 'em all...! ! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (10/27/2009 1:55:00 PM)

    wonderful meditative poem, very well written
    10 ++++++++++

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  • Louis RamsLouis Rams (10/27/2009 7:59:00 AM)

    in the poets universe each face has many facets

    that tells it all!
    gr888888t write a ten

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  • Mohammed Hassan (10/27/2009 4:41:00 AM)

    it's a real work and you chimed the bell of the truth about that world
    In the poets' universe each face has many other facets.........
    you deserve it 10 and even more

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  • Rajaram RamachandranRajaram Ramachandran (10/26/2009 11:27:00 PM)

    In the poet's universe how many incidents I am seeing thru' this poem. Well composed.

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  • Rajaram RamachandranRajaram Ramachandran (10/26/2009 11:27:00 PM)

    In the poet's universe how many incidents I am seeing thru' this poem. Well composed.

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  • Nikunj Sharma (10/26/2009 11:07:00 PM)

    good poem, just watch out for typos

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  • Nikunj Sharma (10/26/2009 11:07:00 PM)

    good poem, just watch out for typos

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  • Sarah Childers (10/26/2009 1:24:00 PM)

    I really liked this poem! It was written beautifully...+10! !

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