I rely on my faith each day
To walk this pernicious way
And "what a journey, " I must say
There's been valleys and some hills
To make the journey less a thrill
But I am determined still.
Battling both day and night
With nary a clear end in sight,
Should I relinquish such a fight?
No.I must by the firmest will
With every breath keep fighting still
And having faith in God until.
© 2013
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Nary means 'not.'
Ah hats off to u for dis awesome excellent poem inspiring faith in sweet rhyme too. I add dis to my fav list.
A well strung chain of words, freeflowing and rhyming, proclaiming to the world the power of faith in oneself and God! Greatly enjoyed! !
A lovely poem that I really enjoyed and agree with. Faith & love is all we have.10/10
I hope you can hang on to your faith. It is a lifetime struggle.A well stated and hopefilled write
Kevin, thank you for your most sincere and deeply touching response, which as well as all the others, is greatly appreciated.
For someone who is more agnostic then a believer this taps in slightly to my desire to want to believe, some make faith look dangerous but you make it look innocent and pure. We all need guidance and a voice you make it seem easy. Thank you for sharing
Life often seems to be a battle, but if we tap into our internal resources, we will get there. Very good write Walterrean.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
well-composed triplets, no reliquishing, of course! ! ! No. I must by the firmest will With every breath keep fighting still And having faith in God until.....Good! ! !