Walterrean Salley

Gold Star - 12,347 Points (Savannah, Ga)

Nightingale's Song - Poem by Walterrean Salley

O'er fields and fountains,
Resounding in mountains
Is the nightingale's song.
Daffodils glisten
As butterflies listen—
Enchanted all day long.

The echoing brine,
A conduit—refine—
Channels such tune along.
O'er rocks and rills
Go the trills
Of a melody that's strong.

On majestic scale
Is the nightingale;
For it is among
The smallest creatures
With grandest features.
And that's where it belongs.

Topic(s) of this poem: bird

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Common Nightingales sing in the daytime as well as at night. The difference is—they sing more during the night, and thus they are called “nightingale.”

Comments about Nightingale's Song by Walterrean Salley

  • (11/8/2012 2:03:00 PM)

    Sweet as the bird ;)
    Moving as the song..
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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (9/15/2012 10:19:00 AM)

    what a beautiful heart print, pictorial poetry added to my poem list, thanks for sharing 10 (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (9/2/2012 10:56:00 AM)

    In Keats' Ode To A Nightingale nightingale's song takes Keats to the world where there are no weariness, fever and fret.Your poem to with its music can make us forget the sorrow and the strife of this world! (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (8/23/2012 12:16:00 AM)

    The Birds:
    The Cuckoo by Wordsworth, The Nightingale by (my) Keats , The skylark by Shelley, The Thrush by Coleridge are immortalised really and The grandest feature of the their song is that it is everywhere n it's difficult to locate the source where does it belong...your poem has the same Flavor of the age of the Romantic Revival...
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  • Valsa George (8/21/2012 8:17:00 AM)

    Nightingale is immortalised by Keats and now here is a poet who has immortalised its song ! ! Simply great (Report) Reply

  • (8/19/2012 7:27:00 PM)

    Lovely write. A joy to read. (Report) Reply

  • Mark Normand (8/10/2012 10:26:00 AM)

    Very good poem with a nice rhythm. I like it. Good job. (Report) Reply

  • Mark Normand (8/10/2012 10:16:00 AM)

    Very good poem with a nice rhythm. I like it. Good job. (Report) Reply

  • Anita Sehgal (8/7/2012 1:52:00 AM)

    Thanks Walterrean.
    This is poetry at its exquisite best!
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  • Captain Cur (8/6/2012 9:19:00 PM)

    This poem sings like a nightingale.
    I liked the rhyme scheme, works magic here.
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  • (8/6/2012 12:46:00 PM)

    Gosh! You are getting great with your rhyming patterns.Your love of all things natural is so apparent.
    Let is throw in a whip-o-wlll. A joy to read
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  • Lasoaphia Quxazs (8/6/2012 9:02:00 AM)

    It is beautiful, there is no need to vote for 10, you already have it. (Report) Reply

  • Amy Marie (8/4/2012 9:51:00 PM)

    Yes, I'm sure nightingales are a very nice part of nature :) (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (8/4/2012 9:30:00 PM)

    Melodious and nicely rhymed.Leaving with the music of nightingale. (Report) Reply

  • (8/4/2012 3:15:00 PM)

    so beautiful and gentle very pleasing to the ear if someone reads it aloud and to the lips if i just read it out
    it is a heart warming melody
    perfect...i really wish i can write like you someday
    thank you for sharing it with us
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  • Ramesh Rai (8/4/2012 9:29:00 AM)

    Really deserving full marks beautiful melody (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (8/3/2012 2:34:00 AM)

    very well written, nice rhymes. By just reading the poems one can hear the nightingale's song in our ears. Fantastic. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (8/2/2012 8:07:00 AM)

    Beautiful write Walterrean, love birds so it goes to the heart for me. (Report) Reply

  • (8/2/2012 2:43:00 AM)

    very nice poem with beautiful melodic meaning! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 2, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, May 15, 2015

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