Family Partition Poem by Rajnish Manga

Family Partition

Rating: 5.0

सन्नाटा भारी छा गया बटवारे के किस्से में
जब मां ने यकसा पूछ लिया के मैं हूँ किसके हिस्से में
(Writer unknown)

An eerie silence prevailed on the matters of partition
When the mother suddenly asked I will go with whom

Wednesday, January 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: family,mother,parting
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I read these lines in Urdu in anmessage.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kingsley Egbukole 08 January 2020

The sad situation of parting and decision taking...10.

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Michael Walker 27 May 2020

Quite a subtle poem of the division in family life. Favouritism.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 January 2020

Partition is a very painful experience. This poem reminds of the India Pakistan partition which left many families devastated. Mother's deep anguish and uncertainty of a future is so well portrayed in this concise poem. A powerful write. Thanks for sharing Rajnish ji.......10

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 January 2020

very evocative. Not only family partition, it reminds of India-Pakistan partition as well. Those that went to Pak from India, I am sure were not so sure, and those Hundus that came here, it must not have been so easy to depart from their birth-land.

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Rajnish Manga 15 January 2020

Absolutely. My father and other members of family left everything behind at partition and migrated to the mainland to start life afresh. People of older generation still have fond memories of the land left behind. Thanks for this feedback, Sir.

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Kesav Easwaran 14 January 2020

Meaningful expression. Mother to part, how and whereto? Bhagavatha Purana narrates an incidence where the elder brothers 'donate' their aged father to the younger one, as a portion of wealth partitioned. 10+

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Rajnish Manga 14 January 2020

It's a pleasure to read about the story from our ancient scriptures like Bhagawata Purana. Thanks for the review and your valuable inputs.

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Rajendran Muthiah 13 January 2020

Like the two lines poem of Ezra Pound, " The Metro Station" , these two lines convey the plight of aged parents and the unsympathetic attitude of the sons and daughters towards the old parents. Excellent.

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Rajnish Manga 14 January 2020

Thanks for a very thoughtful review of the poem. Fresh inputs add to the value of this poetic expression.

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Rajnish Manga

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Meerut / Now at Faridabad
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