Farewell Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

Lovely sentiment. A voyage away from percieved love through tempest to end on the shore of true love.

Your poems are giving the nature of things over there with you.You really have nice piece of works.Keep on writing for the world to read your mind too.A great work.

A nice poem. Very powerful. Keep on writing.

A powerful poem with prophetic intonations. Nice word play as well.

A wonderful poem that ends on a rather hopeful note. Touching and inspiring.

but the boat of love will continue its journey until it reaches the shore of a new beginning…...... good begining with conceived thought.... i loved it full. good write and deserved full 10+++++ read mine: 'never say bye' and yes to to'

Let the boat of love reaches the shore against all troubles. A nice piece with a positive approach.

This is another beautiful piece of poetry. I enjoyed. Keep it up! ! ! Thanks sharing with us. Regards, Kolitha

A great poem in terms of art and thought. It takes me back to Yeats: 'And therefore I have sailed the seas and come To the holy city of Byzantium.'

Joan...This one is very good! I have sailed before, and your poem draws similarities between love and a journey very nicely. Well done! Hugs, Dee