Fatal Fall Poem by Vijay Sai R
Fatal Fall
Platinum spots in a black blanket,
Weeping sky pouring lazy drizzles,
Around eleven in midnight,
The tiny child,
Celebrating birthday,
With her kith and kin,
Playing here and there,
Down her apartment,
Never she know,
That she could slip herself,
Deep into the abandoned borewell,
Everyone searched her helter skelter,
Finally suspecting her inside the deadly trap,
Fire fighters and policemen,
Recovering her after almost forty eight hours,
Only to find her no more,
A victim of asphyxiation,
A blossoming flower,
Nipped in bud,
Let we all pray,
No such incidents,
Happen in future.
Love it! And how you talk about a tragic incident, Of a Girl that feel down and got hurt(died) . Rest her soul, if a true story.
a heartfelt piece indeed brilliant job sir i am in awe............. thank you for sharing love payal
i always enjoy reading poems such as these truthful another great piece
Poem bringing attention to a serious problem. Along with prayer, we need to take steps to prevent such accidents. Thank you.
TWIMC.... accept my sympathy... great pen Vijay Sai... keep it up! ! !
Great poem. I felt sorry for the child and I pray such incident won't happen in the future.
wow! what a seriously dark poem but then again you should read some of mine. you'll be suprised im only sixteen because i only ever write from experience.
Great mind...great thought...great work...great poem! I love this
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 9:05:58 AM # 1.0.0
I love this piece only that it made me feel sad and sorry for the child and family.gud work