This coldness tortures me
This melancholy oppresses me
This silence kills me
I can't cry
I can't laugh
Am I locked?
This darkness ruptures me
This dissonance inside me
Is there any one out there?
Am I too lost?
There's no wind whistling
No murmurs of the night
I'm blinded by these tears
And I can't stop the pain
Let me go
Let me be free
Let me hold my last breath
And change this soul within
For I'm dying here tonight
And all is unwritten
everyone experiences fear, some worse than others, most if not all poets have written about this subject at some time or anothere and it can be hard to express true feeling about fear, one of the best pieces of advice i was told is to use fear to your advantage, harness it and let it move you forward rather than back, nicely expressed poem and dont forget to smile, it may not always feel the best but its for the best :)
These inner fears of unknown origin trouble us. I think u read my poem'mydark nights'. Let us laugh them all.
full of feelings, but i advise you to laugh more as it helps
Fear entwined with my tears jeers at my desires and hopes, Only God can free me from this suffocating rope. Good right.......
Very wonderfully penned poem with nice imagery. Liked it. U get 10++............. Love & hugs...........
Sharp and penetrating. The presentation in groups of 3 is very effective. You pick things that really can hurt: coldness, melancholy, and silence. Well done. Ben
thinking of dearh we continue to live...and thinking of life we continue to die...a good write letting out the inside conflicts... strong and deep...10
M ay you be assured, i n this world many live n urturing fear within. S eek courage from the Lord, i n surpassing a ll fears in your heart, my friend!
A very well written piece about being afraid, Well done 10 Lynda xx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
real torment... you pour it as poetry well done 10+++ please read my poem 'the world'