Fear Poem by Min Sia

Fear

Rating: 5.0


This coldness tortures me
This melancholy oppresses me
This silence kills me
I can't cry
I can't laugh
Am I locked?
This darkness ruptures me
This dissonance inside me
Is there any one out there?
Am I too lost?
There's no wind whistling
No murmurs of the night
I'm blinded by these tears
And I can't stop the pain
Let me go
Let me be free
Let me hold my last breath
And change this soul within
For I'm dying here tonight
And all is unwritten

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
premji premji 25 November 2008

real torment... you pour it as poetry well done 10+++ please read my poem 'the world'

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everyone experiences fear, some worse than others, most if not all poets have written about this subject at some time or anothere and it can be hard to express true feeling about fear, one of the best pieces of advice i was told is to use fear to your advantage, harness it and let it move you forward rather than back, nicely expressed poem and dont forget to smile, it may not always feel the best but its for the best :)

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 November 2008

These inner fears of unknown origin trouble us. I think u read my poem'mydark nights'. Let us laugh them all.

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Costa Anakiev 21 November 2008

full of feelings, but i advise you to laugh more as it helps

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 17 November 2008

Fear entwined with my tears jeers at my desires and hopes, Only God can free me from this suffocating rope. Good right.......

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Gargi Saha 30 November 2008

Very wonderfully penned poem with nice imagery. Liked it. U get 10++............. Love & hugs...........

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Ben Gieske 28 November 2008

Sharp and penetrating. The presentation in groups of 3 is very effective. You pick things that really can hurt: coldness, melancholy, and silence. Well done. Ben

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Kesav Easwaran 26 November 2008

thinking of dearh we continue to live...and thinking of life we continue to die...a good write letting out the inside conflicts... strong and deep...10

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Marvin Brato 25 November 2008

M ay you be assured, i n this world many live n urturing fear within. S eek courage from the Lord, i n surpassing a ll fears in your heart, my friend!

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Lynda Robson 25 November 2008

A very well written piece about being afraid, Well done 10 Lynda xx

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