Feelings Poem by Valerie Dohren
Feelings
Feelings drift like echoes
Through the hollows of the mind
Touching all the senses
As there within defined
Tenderly they flutter
As petals in the breeze
And sweetly do they murmur
Like birdsong in the trees
Or they clap as thunder
To rend your soul apart
Searing as a knife wound
Into your fragile heart
Through all time they linger
And deep within remain
Bringing tears or laughter
As happiness or pain
As you write Val, my dear poetess-----Beautiful.Feelings bring so many shades in our mind! Still, learning from your poems.
Beautiful take on ur emotions-feelings... Descriptive comparisons were spot on Valerie
Beautifully crisp and tightle woven quatrain stanzaic structure...Moves like those 'petals in the breeze'...Serene and substanceful write, Val ~FjR~
Another fine poem from one of my favorite artists. Thanks again, Val
Feelings of joy and sorrow expressed in varying degrees through beautiful similes..... As ever this poem is melodious and precise and in excellent form! ! !
Excellent writing on the variety of feelings, brilliant form and style.
Feelings so well spelt out...To rent your soul apart...feelings the meter of our hearts, it has my top vote indeed...regards
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Wow! Again I am speechless! a very beautiful write