Feelings So Deep Poem by Lyn Paul
Feelings So Deep
The raw honesty pains me, as I live my everyday
My feelings are so deep... is there no other way
The pain, the hurt, I've tried so hard to get through it
Feelings so deep, feeling I may just loose it
The weakness getting stronger - Feeling Alone
Feeling like the world is tossing stones
I know so well in this world there are far bigger issues
Does this help? NO! I still need the tissues
Right or wrong. Just take it all in
No matter what. No one will win
There are no winners on this page of life
The tables have turned- out with the knives
Feelings so deep, I've broken this earth
Not too many reasons.. yet now self worth
So now...it is time that will tell just what will be
Feelings so deep, In time I will see
I will see why the hurt and authorise the repair
Get the puncture kit and soak the tear
Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL
Who has happened to pass this phase knows well, what's mental agony! A great write Lyn!
There are no winners on this page of life life would've been so fulfilling had we let it influence our every action!
Heart is so full with feelings, sometimes we dive deeper into despair room inside it...we all feel it and no one missed it...Just wish we can find something that we can find hope one more time, something that can recall what happiness to us, may it again open us a secret door to be smile and survive one more time_Soul
Superb! Touching expression...loved this thoughtful write.
life can be good life can be tough but in the ens it is all worth while.
Your poems are about life's li'l though deep realities...very universal, i can see there's a meaning in this unpunctuated flow! ! !
Feeling like the world is tossing stones I know so well in this world there are far bigger issues Does this help? NO! I still need the tissues Great lines! ! Even when we know that our issues are relatively smaller, yet at times we can't take all!
I like the last line Lyn it could be the title of a poem. I might nick it off you! Joking apart a deep but poignant poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 2:22:07 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Beautiful write Lyn...Yes, life is like that.....As you said I will see why the hurt and authorise the repair, Get the puncture kit and soak the tear...Loved reading it. Thanks for the inspiring comments for my poem....Thanks a lot.