Fiasco Poem by Sameer Ahmed

Fiasco

Rating: 5.0


Vitality consumed
Body feels droopy
It is a mind seizure
Makes you loopy.



(6/29/2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 29 June 2009

oops...! did it again meaningful and resides at the level of the reader... cheers

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Sushmita Moktan 30 June 2009

its true..well written

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Antonio Liao 30 June 2009

truth of knight in a very shinning armor of your thought....splendid as its hover in my mind....a poem switch on as medicine of the dream fantastic my friend….Gods bless... a10+++

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 02 July 2009

oh So thats my problem Doctor Sameer... Like it very much!

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Sandra Fowler 03 July 2009

We all have days like this. You are in good company, Sameer. 10, of course. Warm regards, Sandra

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Shashendra Amalshan 29 July 2009

this is sort of amusing read... bro.. i liked this one... with lvs shan

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Yelena M. 12 July 2009

A very true to life poem, Sameer. Adore the language you choose, as always :) Best wishes. A.

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Christopher Flynn 10 July 2009

This is how I feel each day after work.. My life is a Fiasco this I know Woderfull poem

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Good one Sameer. It's like when we run out of steam in the afternoon after a frantic busy day. I love the word 'loopy'. 10 Karin Anderson

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Bob Blackwell 04 July 2009

The way we think determines how we feel, the way we feel can determine how we think. Wise thinking. Bob Blackwell

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