Sameer Ahmed

The Little One

The Little One arrives
From heavenly drives

The Little One says like hello
With a sweet, beautiful mellow

The Little One cries
With shine in the eyes

The Little One smiles
With innocent styles

The Little One takes feed
Like a new sown seed

The Little One speaks
With dimples on his cheeks

The Little One jingles
With me he intermingles

The Little One holds my hand
When he grapples to stand

The Little One plays in joy
With an invisible angelic toy

The Little One sleeps
With a tiny dream he peeps

The Little One my nephew Fozan
Named by Gran Pa, life lives on.....




(12/15/2008)

Poem Submitted: Monday, December 15, 2008
Poem Edited: Saturday, April 18, 2009

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  • Yelena M. (6/23/2009 1:24:00 AM)

    Such a captivating poem, Sameer..Children are flowers of our life, and you express it here with such joy, love and inspiration.Thanks for sharing!
    A Smile to you and best wishes :)
    A.

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  • nomad omnia (3/20/2009 10:11:00 AM)

    beautiful Ahmed, thanks for stirring fond memories :) N

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  • Madeline Berry (2/24/2009 5:09:00 AM)

    Great writing, you have a gift ;)

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  • sumaira .....ir (2/1/2009 2:47:00 AM)

    sooooooooooooo swt + cute poem a wonderful tribute 2 swty cuty baby it give smile on our faces love it THANKS dear 4 sharing++++++++++++++10 :)

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  • sumaira .....ir (2/1/2009 2:46:00 AM)

    sooooooooooooo swt + cute poem a wonderful tribute 2 swty cuty baby it give smile on our faces love it THANKS dear 4 sharing++++++++++++++10 :)

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  • A. Nonymous (1/31/2009 12:21:00 AM)

    I like this one the most out of your poems...good job Sameer 10/10

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  • Pampero Jadan (1/22/2009 4:16:00 PM)

    brilliant poem the words dances together unity is perfect i am not surprized cause this you are from indian blood they have too much talent u did awesome paka!
    well done doctor

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  • Pampero Jadan (1/22/2009 4:16:00 PM)

    brilliant poem the words dances together unity is perfect i am not surprized cause this you are from indian blood they have too much talent u did awesome paka!
    well done doctor

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  • Marama Kelly (1/21/2009 2:27:00 AM)

    This is really beautiful and is well worded, well expressed and has a good flow and rhythmn from beginning to end. The imagery that comes from your words shows so much adoration and love for this new life that has entered the world and all the wonders and joys of life are seen emanated through this child. You have a talent indeed that is worth sharing to the world. Well done. Many blessings to you

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  • A.M.WOOD meme (1/20/2009 7:45:00 AM)

    I thouroughly enjoyed this piece...just so beautifully written!

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  • Chitra - (1/19/2009 10:09:00 AM)

    an absolutely delightful write on the little bundle of joy

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  • Ivor Hogg (1/18/2009 5:55:00 AM)

    Rhyming couplets a wise choice for this delightful offering

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  • Iris Washington (1/15/2009 6:15:00 PM)

    A truly delightful poem about a child just starting out to discover.

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  • Meggie GultianoMeggie Gultiano (1/2/2009 10:16:00 PM)

    a blessing to have a little one around. Lovely thoughts.Thanks

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  • Ruerd Visser (12/30/2008 5:44:00 AM)

    The little one will live on in our hearts thanks to you.

    Heavenly greetings from home

    Boomfriend Ruerd

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  • Linda Moore (12/25/2008 1:21:00 AM)

    Beauty in the child and your poem.....10

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  • Surayya Abbas (12/17/2008 12:43:00 PM)

    It's a nice poem full of love and sweetness. This will be a lovely gift and rememberance for Fozan when he will be grown up. Fozan really deserves this...Ayya Aapi.

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  • Mamta Agarwal (12/17/2008 8:10:00 AM)

    Sameer, your joy on becoming an uncle is evident from this poem- sense of wonder, love, tenderness- a very lovely poem and a perfect ending.10


    Mamta

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  • Naru Kaede (12/17/2008 3:23:00 AM)

    This poem is very lovely,
    A new born nephew... congratulation...
    You decribe it very interesting, than I can imagine how
    happy you are... hehehe... I bet he/she must be cute...

    Regard,
    Naru Kaede,

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  • Krista Churchill (12/16/2008 9:54:00 PM)

    So sweet and cute... They are all so little when born great work


    KRISTA

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