Finesse! Poem by Siddartha Montik

Finesse!

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finesse! !

is a clear finesse I feel seeing you,
wonder, if at all you know in total of you!

any expression of you is so precise,
makes me understand more than your words in surprise!

never I have to rake my mind,
all I understand is always so profound!

much that even if you stay silent,
your eyes down I just feel something benevolent!

your utter silence too I feel vibes that are so clear,
much that every second of my life makes me feel dear!

still wonder I met you in some clear accident,
in all means I would say, it is nothing but always so succulent!

just with you and never before I had this feel,
surely it all must can never be any surreal!

even if you say I must assess myself,
can take a life time recess finding itself!

still I would say it is a finesse of such surpass!

Friday, June 4, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Omar Ibrahim 07 June 2010

it has been so long since I last read your poems..that's a nice one indeed. thanks for sharing. (please read mine'plants in agony')

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Indira Renganathan 19 November 2016

Not at all any surreal....true romantic hearty words....thank you- full marks10

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 November 2016

Myself! Facing the ways of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Malaya Roses 14 June 2010

Mind expression and emotion wave in one poem. very impressive and done in an artistic sentences. Very good.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 08 June 2010

‘…never be any surreal’…I agree … You’re in Real’ love romance as you’re in your recess already what I can assess.. Thanks sharing 10/10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Omar Ibrahim 07 June 2010

it has been so long since I last read your poems..that's a nice one indeed. thanks for sharing. (please read mine'plants in agony')

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