Francie! Poem by Siddartha Montik

Francie!

Rating: 5.0


Catch me at the End of the World,
Hold me when I fall from heights,
You reached my hand and held it tight,

Tell me 'there is GOD, and you believe too',
We share his goodness in our days
Utter his words through your silence and or even taboo!

Nothing is beyond his creation, Everything as is
We can never cross his design for certain!
He 'is' perfection and humbles us with modesty

Yet we go on to make our own rules
Often Misunderstanding of his intentions
And yet he forgives us though we are fools

His Kindness and patience will all makes that sense
that some day we all will get to know him
But let us only have our look at him.
thru all his creation, if Nature or Universe!

(with humble and honest Love to a friend Francie!)

copyright © Siddartha Montik (Ramesh Kompella)

Thursday, December 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayne Doe 11 December 2016

Great poem about the limitations of man and G-d's understanding and acceptance of it.

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Siddartha Montik 14 December 2016

Thank you so much Jayne! ..we have, YES limitations, almighty only knows!

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Indira Renganathan 08 December 2016

Faith in God always gives us strength and support...specially timely support in critical and dangerous situations..ask any staunch pious person...she or he will have lots of such experiences to tell us....good thought, good poem..God bless you- 10+++

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Naila Rais 09 April 2018

A awesome write.... I really love it .. Naila

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Louis Borgo 04 February 2017

Like the rhyme scheme and like the stanza of 4 lines verses great job.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 December 2016

His kindness and patience.Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 16 December 2016

Lovely lines of consolation charged with emotion to a friend.A charming poem in soft wordings.

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Bharati Nayak 15 December 2016

His Kindness and patience will all makes that sense that some day we all will get to know him But let us only have our look at him. thru all his creation, if Nature or Universe! - - - A great poem.We can feel God through His creation Nature or Universe! ! Thanks for sharing.

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