Wake Up Honey! Poem by Siddartha Montik

Wake Up Honey!

Rating: 4.3


Couple's normal arguments stepped to a skirmish,
no one wanted to retreat for an ego clash.

end came as a silent agreement, no talk no more,
egos satisfied to the best of the Hour.

things started falling apart sooner,
is not any funny way, for a family to go-on forever.

so..., thought of talking through a book,
everything going-on well, like a silent Clock.

A day, one wrote 'wake me up early, would you Sweet? ',
couldn't even utter any angry word, as woke up so late.

went to the book to check for an answer in it,
sure found it in a quick, only to get aghast.

it was simple, but a straight answer because,
the scribble reads 'wake-up honey, would you Please? '

copyright © Siddartha Montik (Ramesh Kompella)

Wake Up Honey!
Thursday, August 25, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: silence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 06 November 2016

'arguments stepped to a skirmish, no one wanted to retreat for an ego clash' could write volumes on these amazing lines

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Ankita Bhattacharjee 31 May 2017

Loved it! Particularly the way you ended the poem with that witty couplet was indeed remarkable.

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O Poet Me Poety 22 December 2017

ALL COMMENTS ARE INTACT WHAT ELSE U WANT MORE O POET TAKE CARE EAD ONE THE U WILL ALSO BE READ

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Bri Edwards 19 November 2016

you sent me: last but not the Least on a lighter Note 'Wake-up Honey'. though the title on this page does not match the one you sent me (exactly) , i'll take a chance and read this one. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - end came as a silent agreement, no talk nomore, .............you want to use no more? ;) as is not any funny way, for a family to go-on forever...........i am not the author, but if i understand what you mean, i would type fun way, not funny way. a fun way would be pleasant and perhaps evoke smiles or even laughter. a funny way would either be an odd way, or a humorous way, i say. btw, it seems a welcome back may be in order. Welcome Back To PoemHunter! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A day, one wrote 'wake me up early, would you Sweet? ', couldn't even utter any angry word, as woke up so late............i'm not understanding how the second line would follow the first line, i.e. i don't see the cause and effect here making sense to me. but i'm in a hurry. almost supper time here! ....only to get aghast. ..............i might say...be aghast or...become aghast - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i'm not sure i follow what exactly happened, but i guess the writing thing didn't work well enough, or at least not all the time. but maybe it was better than speaking. i've been married four times. i SHOULD know the difficulties here! yes, my mate has had me write notes to her rather than speak at times, because my speech sometimes (often) grates on her nerves! ! ! bri :) good one.

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Siddartha Montik 29 May 2017

I am delighted by your descriptive comment! ! AMEN!

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Kyvin Nash 18 April 2019

Wow so real! Siddartha, I love this beautiful poem, thank you for sharing. +10

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Ayan Mondal 12 February 2019

Nice.........thanks for sharing..

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 02 February 2018

Another beautiful and interesting poem. I am getting familiar with your style.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 27 January 2018

Lovely poem! True to life and marriage!

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Savita Tyagi 24 January 2018

Interesting and amusing. Best situation comedy on silent communications. Thanks for sharing.

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