Wednesday, December 24, 2008

Firestone Comments

Rating: 5.0

In Firestone where oak meets pine
A woodland that is so divine,
Its pathway crazed and strewn with cone
The ground is dry and hard as stone,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Moushumi moushumi 02 January 2009

A very good piece of canvas on imagery.

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Vaibhav Pandey 01 January 2009

excellent poem, sir You deserve 10 for this

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Kesav Easwaran 31 December 2008

beautifully painted poem portrait...eloquent verbal images inside...good piece, Andrew...10

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Ted Sheridan 29 December 2008

Your poem is a beautiful verse. I enjoyed reading it.

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Lynda Robson 29 December 2008

Fantastic imagery Andrew, I felt as though I was there, well done, 10 Lynda xx

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Anjali Sinha 29 December 2008

your poem stands out ---in all its bounty and beauty of nature full of lovely imagery-----10 anjali

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Alison Cassidy 29 December 2008

Your artist's brush has once again created an exquisite pastoral scene. The rhyming couplets work beautifully as a canvass and your artist's eye is sharp as ever. My favorite line is: 'The nettles growing in the shade Now stand like soldiers on parade.' Another outstanding write. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Bonnie Collins 27 December 2008

Andrew, how beautifully you have painted this picture... I can hear the ducks on shore, and smell the pine distantly as the winds gently blow. So filled with much color and imagery... Excellent as Usual.... You are the Robert Frost in my world! ! Bonnie

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C.R. Clark 26 December 2008

As usual, Andrew, you have painted a beautiful mural with your words. I do love to read your poetic scenes of nature. Great write, my friend. 10 plus. Best regards Richard

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 25 December 2008

Nature always been a source of poetry, infact nature itself is a great creating force. A good piece of write expressing nature's divinity.

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Linda Moore 25 December 2008

I could feel the music in this beautiful poem....10+

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Ramesh T A 24 December 2008

Beautifully composed poem expressing Nature's delight in enjoyable form! Nice poem!

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