Fish Dialogues Comments

Rub a fish... Make a wish. Throw it back in... Almost pulled, inside. Wrist wrestled from the deep. Wish came true, this one I keep. Great poem. What do ya think o' this one? MJG... Of the world, of poetry.

You dedicate poems to every1 on poemhunter? why? good write

i enjoied reading this lovely poem...good work my friend

man is destroying the earth...and he wont fix it....never

very subtle environmental concerns expressed here...

a timely warning written in catchy phrases.beautufull.posted 10 surya

A good description on our polluted seas and the poor marine life. A job well done! !

Dear Siddiqui, I liked your choice of subjects, It is true no of fishes and other creatures under water are regularly dieing out of pollution created by us, It's a timely call to control pollution to the mankind. But in the third paragraph I feel ' innocence'should be 'innocent ' and 'pollution ' should be 'polluted' This perhaps will give a better end-rhyme as well.This is a mere suggestion from my side, Thanks for asking comments-Rajkumar

A nice message to the society! Congrats!

observant with much needed detailed descriptions embedded.. share with the world!

Let us keep the sea pollution free for the fishes to live happily. This message fromthe poem is timely.

The message is clear. Good. How can the waters be innocent? Waters can be calm.

Great dialogue. Let men learn from the fish to strenthen our sustenance system. CP

again always enjoying your poems linking your love and advocacy for nature and the sea, , , , , how we take for granted often the most precious......

meaningful poem crafted with fishes and other sea creatures.........lovely! ! !

All them fish washed on the shore dead from pollution. - nice poem - sensative