Five Fingered Aids Poem by merna ibrahim

Five Fingered Aids

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I am an important thing in your body.
I help you to study.
I make you able to write.
I make you able to hold the kite.

I consist of ten fingers
Every finger ends with a nail.
By me, blind people can read by the way of Braille.

My function is to hold things.
I hold the microphone which you use it to sing.

I am a valuable thing to you.
You use me every minute, Yes you do! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zeinab Sherif 11 August 2009

ا ج م ل م ن د ة ا ن ا م ا ش ف ت with my fingers 2 i write my h.w & eat the chocolate my favourite sweet food.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 10 August 2009

With fingers I type messages and ask people to read my poems...........a good write......

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 August 2009

The fingers is the greatest creation, symbolises thought like what we could and couldn't do, without those fingers, which is something we need to ponder during our idle times.Good writes Merna dear.

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Lady Grace 09 August 2009

nicely written..expressive..

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very nice poem young lady.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 January 2010

I am an important thing in your body. I help you to study. I make you able to write. I make you a......... ........................ EVERY FINGER HAS IMPORTANT ROLE TO PLAY...LOVELY PIECE OF WRITING........10 READ MINE.. COME OUT

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 06 November 2009

a creative poem Merna! you used a bright poetic way to define FINGERS/ Thanks For Sharing/

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Afzal Shauq 12 October 2009

consist of ten fingers Evey finger ends with a nail. By me.blind people can read by the way of Braille. good merna.. thsi is true what ou said here in this sweet and rich poem.. reality is what you tried to strennthened in the example of ten fingures of hands. when they join each other the difficult works have been done easily... good idea.. and rich poem with meaningful message..liked it..well done 10/10

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Kesav Easwaran 15 August 2009

nice imagination Merna...and truthful too...good piece...10

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Doha Ewiess 12 August 2009

simply nice....... :)

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