Five Liner. Flowers Poem by Valsa George

Five Liner. Flowers

Rating: 4.8


What delectable cheer flowers bring
Each blossom is a heavenly thing
With them, even a house morbid and unlit
Can be turned into a palace of delight
When bees n’ butterflies alight, what life they impart!

Five Liner. Flowers
Monday, December 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: flowers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 08 December 2015

Green In Love (A comment, perhaps a poem) House is the name of greenery of a woman, who springs colorful flowers. Nature sends her messengers in the shape of honey bees and pretty butterflies. Who cares for a paradise if he gets a woman who is green in love. When I see a beautiful house, it's secret of beauty, is not hidden to me, let me reveal, there must be a woman, a beautiful wife, a mother so lovely, a kind daughter-in-law, who knows the art, of concealing her tears, in beautiful smiles. Again a secret I reveal, when a woman like this, smiles in her house, nature smiles with her!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 December 2015

Each words has come down from heaven of mind and each blossom is a definitely heavenly thing. Very wise and interesting poem shared definitely. Motivational piece of work.10

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 December 2015

Flowers enhance the beauty of whatever entity they adorn. House turns into a heavenly abode to live and enjoy.

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Hazel Durham 12 December 2015

Beautiful write and beautiful picture Valsa, flowers are the symbol of beauty and joy captured as they bloom with such perfection, as we display them to bring cheer and new beginnings!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 May 2019

Really flowers bring delectable cheer. You have so nicely justified through your pen with appropriate graphic. A beautiful poem fantastically inscribed.

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 May 2018

Nature has given us paradise! The irresistible beauty of flowers, and their capacity to heal and enchant! Lovely flowers and lovely lines!

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Sranisha Francis 14 May 2016

Dear poet, I liked it so much............... Each blossom is a heavenly thing

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 December 2015

Nice work with the beauty of nature.

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Bri Edwards 17 December 2015

so much lit and light! my eye is starting to hurt! nice photo. is that the guest cottage i'll stay in next time i 'drop over'? normally i'd bring a gift of flowers, but i can see that you have enough! need any more bees? bri :)

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