Valsa George


Five Liner. Flowers - Poem by Valsa George

What delectable cheer flowers bring
Each blossom is a heavenly thing
With them, even a house morbid and unlit
Can be turned into a palace of delight
When bees n’ butterflies alight, what life they impart!

Topic(s) of this poem: flowers


Comments about Five Liner. Flowers by Valsa George

  • Bri Edwards (11/17/2016 8:52:00 PM)


    my second annual comment:

    once a bee 'imparted' extra life to me............when it stung me in the ass!

    bri :)

    aka 'naughty boy'
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  • Sranisha Francis (5/14/2016 8:35:00 AM)


    Dear poet,
    I liked it so much...............
    Each blossom is a heavenly thing
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/27/2015 4:38:00 AM)


    Nice work with the beauty of nature. (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards (12/17/2015 9:09:00 PM)


    so much lit and light! my eye is starting to hurt!

    nice photo. is that the guest cottage i'll stay in next time i 'drop over'?
    normally i'd bring a gift of flowers, but i can see that you have enough!

    need any more bees? bri
    :)
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  • Hazel Durham (12/12/2015 11:22:00 AM)


    Beautiful write and beautiful picture Valsa, flowers are the symbol of beauty and joy captured as they bloom with such perfection, as we display them to bring cheer and new beginnings! (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/8/2015 7:18:00 AM)


    Flowers enhance the beauty of whatever entity they adorn. House turns into a heavenly abode to live and enjoy. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/8/2015 3:25:00 AM)


    Each words has come down from heaven of mind and each blossom is a definitely heavenly thing. Very wise and interesting poem shared definitely. Motivational piece of work.10 (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (12/8/2015 2:55:00 AM)


    Green In Love
    (A comment, perhaps a poem)

    House is the name of greenery of a woman,
    who springs colorful flowers.
    Nature sends her messengers
    in the shape of honey bees
    and pretty butterflies.
    Who cares for a paradise
    if he gets a woman
    who is green in love.
    When I see a beautiful house,
    it's secret of beauty,
    is not hidden to me,
    let me reveal,
    there must be a woman,
    a beautiful wife,
    a mother so lovely,
    a kind daughter-in-law,
    who knows the art,
    of concealing her tears,
    in beautiful smiles.
    Again a secret I reveal,
    when a woman like this,
    smiles in her house,
    nature smiles with her!
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 7, 2015



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