A bright star departs
From the galaxy of stars
Slips swiftly from the sky
To show off its light.
Two beautiful lovers
Wish for a love forever
But like the shooting star
Their love departs in a deep sigh.
Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
Night skies, stars, sighs, shootings of beauty's temporal light, all contained in a lover's world. A wonderful write.
Love needs to be nurtured and like wine, be allowed to age gently.
I just read with great interest, I am deeply impressed by the most valuable theme in the life closest to us, impressively presented, all deep respect for the great poetess with sincere applause,5 Stars!
Oh Wow! .. How heart moving! .. And deeply, and beautifully, expressed! .. Magnificently written! .. Touching the hearts of all! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++
Depth of love is understood when the lovers are away
Fortunately there are so many stars to shine with. Good poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love is what needs to be nurtured and maintained forever. A fight or a bad mood completely spoils all that was good and green. We all need to keep the fire of love in every storm that tries to shatter.