Fleeting Moments Of Joy Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Fleeting Moments Of Joy

Rating: 5.0


A bright star departs
From the galaxy of stars
Slips swiftly from the sky
To show off its light.

Two beautiful lovers
Wish for a love forever
But like the shooting star
Their love departs in a deep sigh.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 22 February 2021

Love is what needs to be nurtured and maintained forever. A fight or a bad mood completely spoils all that was good and green. We all need to keep the fire of love in every storm that tries to shatter.

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Kostas Lagos 22 February 2021

Love is like a shooting star...brilliant!

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Captain Cur 22 February 2021

Night skies, stars, sighs, shootings of beauty's temporal light, all contained in a lover's world. A wonderful write.

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David Wood 22 February 2021

Love needs to be nurtured and like wine, be allowed to age gently.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 February 2021

I just read with great interest, I am deeply impressed by the most valuable theme in the life closest to us, impressively presented, all deep respect for the great poetess with sincere applause,5 Stars!

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Rebecca Navarre 03 November 2021

Oh Wow! .. How heart moving! .. And deeply, and beautifully, expressed! .. Magnificently written! .. Touching the hearts of all! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

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Anjandev Roy 17 July 2021

Outstanding

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Depth of love is understood when the lovers are away

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Anjandev Roy 23 February 2021

Glorious work.....thank u....

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Deluke Muwanigwa 23 February 2021

Fortunately there are so many stars to shine with. Good poem

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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